The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In the statement, it is being assert that the optimum way for a society to nurture its young people for leadership in a myriad of fields is by inoculate in them a sense of cooperation instead of competition. In my point of view, this argument might hold true in the field of government and business but not not art.
there are many qualities that a successful leader should own. Two of the most important quality, in my opinion, are creativeness and flexibility. when working as a group, a perfect environment for brainstorm will form, where all the people being involved are able to see what others’ perspectives are. In other words, it is an efficient way to broaden and widen one’s vision and ways of thinking; when there are more ideas, the greater the possibilities that a person are able to adroitly come up with the most suitable solution to different kinds of problem. In workplace such as government and business, flexibility is crucial since people, especially leaders, are going to tackle new problems every single day. Each problem has its own unique situation, thus the leaders should have creativeness to come up with the ideas also flexible way of thinking to look at one problem from various aspects, and those are the abilities that teamwork can help ones to form.
However, to be prepare for leadership in the field of art, the situation is completely different. A great leader is to have audacious thoughts and the strong-will to break the doctrine, which makes the competitions between art genre beneficial. Claude mona, one of the most regarded painters in the field of art, was leading the advent-grade genre at his time, impressions. After mona, Van gogh, one of the greatest and most talented artists throughout the history, was the leader of post-impressionism. At that time, there was an acute competition between people who support the orthodox academicism and people like mona and gogh who had strong will to lead new genres of painting and to express their inner feelings in a better way. Without the competition about which genre should be acceptable, their leadership in post-impressionism and Impressionism will not become as significant as they are today, and certainly will be less valuable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, thus, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 373.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06970509383 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97890577845 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573726541555 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2555703423 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.071428571 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6428571429 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217835158755 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739417746777 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123536134787 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185304792136 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136452162413 0.0667264976115 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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