The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Novice individuals are more diligent and moldable. Trainning them for competition or cooperation is equivocal. People with passion to achieve success will always follow competition but to run a company cooperation between them plays a vital role
To begin with, people are being competitive even to achieve a fraction of more success than others. For a society, developing each other is relevant for future. A country with abundant of opulence can help a indigent country's economic condition. However, after a point all country or even an single individual has internal rush to be more successful. Competition is required to develop a nation. For example, all the big companies like Google and Facebook have a healthy competition which has lead to series of development which is difficult to even think.
Secondly, there are many competitions held among people in every walk of life. There are some who accomplish and rest fall into their mundane routine. In this competitve world, there is no room for ambiguity. Firm decisions and cogent thinking for between peers help them to be beyond the boundary. Avaricious nature of mankind is difficult to change. Competition has become part of our life's. For example, students capabilty to study further in college can only be decide by his scores. If there is cooperation and not competiton, students can hinder their way of thinking of handling issues.
However, people must have healthy competition between themselves. Indeed, this could lead to decieving and bastardization. For example, if students are not prepared for their exams. Cheating during exams to preclude from flunking can be their moto. Competition is important but venality should be avoided. Cooperation and reverence between employees is important to run a company efficently.
In conclusion, there will always be competition ot stand out from rest. Cooperation is also important factor to run a company melliflously. Nevertheless, competiting is growth of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37380191693 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98152401457 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565495207668 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9993951175 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.28 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.52 23.4991977007 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.04 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250693527906 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715249341407 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754953785916 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148565986299 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447506254684 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 48.8420337079 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 12.1743820225 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.