The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore the negative ones
while the pursuit of knowledge has long been associated with the enlightenment of the human mind and a deepening understanding of the world, it is essential to consider whether the accumulation of knowledge genuinely leads to increased comprehensibility or, conversely, to greater complexity and mystery. this essay explores the intriguing notion that, as we acquire more knowledge, things do not necessarily become more comprehensible but often evolve into entities that are more intricate and enigmatic. First and foremost, knowledge often begets questions, leading to a deeper exploration of subjects that were previously deemed understood. consider the realm of science, where breakthroughs in understanding have historically given rise to new questions and challenges. For instance, the discovery of subatomic particles introduced the world to a realm of quantum mechanics, a field marked by perplexing phenomena such as wave-particle duality and non-locality. Each revelation in this area, far from simplifying the universe, has unveiled layers of complexity that challenge conventional wisdom. instead of offering straightforward answers, increased knowledge can generate more questions, making the world appear more mysterious than ever. Moreover, the advancement of knowledge frequently uncovers intricacies that were previously hidden. Take the field of genetics, for example. As our understanding of DNA and genetic information deepens, the complexity of the interplay between genes, proteins, and environmental factors becomes increasingly apparent. What were once simple notions of genetic inheritance have given way to complex epigenetic interactions and gene-environment dynamics. In this context, acquiring more knowledge doesn't lead to simplicity but rather to a recognition of the intricate web of factors that govern genetic expression, thereby adding layers of enigma to a subject that was once seen as straightforward. In the realm of philosophy, as well, the pursuit of knowledge has led to profound questions and debates. philosophers have long delved into profound inquiries about the nature of reality, the existence of God, and the essence of consciousness. As these inquiries delve deeper and knowledge expands, the philosophical landscape becomes more intricate and mysterious. For every argument, there is a counterargument, and the more we explore these questions, the more elusive answers can seem. The quest for knowledge in philosophy often does not simplify the mysteries of existence but rather reveals their profound nature. it is worth noting that the paradoxical nature of knowledge also extends into the arts and literature. As artists and writers delve into their crafts, their work can grow more complex and multi-layered as they attempt to encapsulate the intricacies of the human experience. Novels, paintings, and music that resonate deeply often derive their power from exploring the human condition's vast and multifaceted nature, rendering it more mysterious and awe-inspiring rather than simplifying it. In conclusion, while the acquisition of knowledge undoubtedly broadens our horizons and deepens our understanding of the world, it does not always lead to increased comprehensibility. instead, it frequently reveals greater complexity and mystery. As we delve deeper into the intricacies of science, genetics, philosophy, and the arts, we uncover layers of questions and intricacies that enrich our view of the world but often make it more enigmatic. this paradox is an essential facet of the human quest for knowledge, one that continually drives us to explore the profound mysteries that surround us.
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- The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people s efficiency so that they have more leisure time 66
- The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people s efficiency so that they have more leisure time 66
- Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species despite the expense to humans in effort time and financial well being Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts especially at a great cost in money an 66
- The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people s efficiency so that they have more leisure time 66
- The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people s efficiency so that they have more leisure time 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3116.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 539.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78107606679 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32173476008 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497217068646 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 973.8 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1530491653 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4583333333 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0109811017779 0.243740707755 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00347419360185 0.0831039109588 4% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0115432210884 0.0758088955206 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0109811017779 0.150359130593 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.1639044944 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 167.0 100.480337079 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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