Education, Business and Government plays a vital role in the economic development of the country worldwide. They offer a hand to burgeon the overall growth of the state. Whether to remain skeptical of new leaders in this arena requires more analysis and scrupulous discussion before agreeing on a point. To bolster the statement In my opinion, I have put forward three reasons.
Firstly, None of the leader emerged as an overnight star. All of them had to go through individual hardships to achieve a ravenous success. For instance, Jeff Bezos who started his online platform for selling his books started in a garage now emerged as a prominent platform worldwide. They even entered into different paths such as cloud technologies and even into pharmacy lately. All this had become possible only the belief he showed in his work from beginning and the constant thrive of energy to gain the trust of his employers. Now If one conveys the fact that he is an employee in the company the level of respect he would gain has emerged.
Furthermore, Everyone has to grow through an enormous learning curve to show the potential and to procure the belief of the relegates. For instance, Narendra Modi who started his career as tea seller has now become the prime minister of the country. The trust that he gained from his fellow party leaders and people has not only taken months but a several years. Even when he was elected in this position many were skeptical if he could achieve an augmented progress. But with the coordinal relations he established with the neighboring countries has helped India to greatly raise their import and export trades which in turn helped the economic growth and also assured a trusted help when they are in need.
Lastly, When we consider Elon Musk he initially started an online payment platform PayPal and got shifted to the position of CEO to Tesla Motors everyone was unsure whether he could make it or not as the stock values are also dripping in value. It is his credence in will that made the stocks raise like a rocket and he also introduced Electric cars which is an innovative revolution including the auto pilot mode changed the game to a whole different perspective. It is the trust he gained through these success that is why even if he just post a rustic tweet then the shares of other products are sky rocketed in few minutes.
To conclude, to evolve either in business, education or government field it is the trust we keep in leaders that drives us to move forward. The moment they come they should start revealing all the abilities they persist to gain the belief. If one had lost his trust in his leader he would never be able to taste success as a company or an organization. It would start crumbling at foundation level.
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- The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of a food distribution company with food storage warehouses in several cities Recently we signed a contract with the Fly Away Pest Control Company to provide pest control services at our fast food w 65
- The best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'year'?
Suggestion: year
...has not only taken months but a several years. Even when he was elected in this posit...
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Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'augmented progress'.
Suggestion: augmented progress
...many were skeptical if he could achieve an augmented progress. But with the coordinal relations he es...
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Line 4, column 499, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this success' or 'these successes'?
Suggestion: this success; these successes
...tive. It is the trust he gained through these success that is why even if he just post a rust...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, so, then, as to, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2287.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73498964803 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52347406042 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542443064182 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8374241275 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.954545455 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9545454545 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164323400875 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501092825951 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556021358132 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108106137706 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709737542299 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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