Children have responsibility to take care of their old family members, but some people say that old
people should not need to live with their families. What is your opinion?
The life structure of a human being is that at some point they must people to take care of them
and at some points they need to help others. I have shared certain points about whether or not
children should take care of old family.
Firstly, any kid a support is required to grow up, this support reduces as and when the kid grows up,
but there would be time where they will have to return the support and it would be abominable if
that youngster abdicates towards old family member. Being a kid our day-to-day activities was
repeatedly trained by our elders with patient, we need to give it back to them. For Instance, my
friend was brought-up by his grandparents and he feels responsible to take care of them. My point
being for the view is that his duty towards his grandparents is justified.
Secondly, despite some people feel that old family members need not live with family, they posses
morals which is required for younger generations. I believe that life is a circle and that we can also
become old, what we do will happen to us. We should set examples for our future generation by
showing them that we take care of our elders, In this way we take care of our future by taking care
of our elders. One Incidence is that when my father was angry at my grandfather for an unknown
reason to me, I too was angry at him as I stereotyped his thought process. I reassessed my thinking
towards people and decided not to separate older family members for any particular issues.
To sum up life of children and old family member is intertwined and if people are kept aside because
of old age, it would be inhumane and that it should be avoided.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...support and it would be abominable if that youngster abdicates towards old family ...
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...ive it back to them. For Instance, my friend was brought-up by his grandparents and ...
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...nsible to take care of them. My point being for the view is that his duty towards h...
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...life is a circle and that we can also become old, what we do will happen to us. We s...
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...ngry at my grandfather for an unknown reason to me, I too was angry at him as I ster...
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... and if people are kept aside because of old age, it would be inhumane and that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 28.8173652695 184% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 2260.96107784 61% => OK
No of words: 303.0 441.139720559 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58415841584 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42212298145 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 204.123752495 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508250825083 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 705.55239521 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 4.96107784431 242% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7594651691 57.8364921388 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 119.503703932 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 23.324526521 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.70786347227 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 5.15768463074 349% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224108944897 0.218282227539 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908448434006 0.0743258471296 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676620204072 0.0701772020484 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813145972873 0.128457276422 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798221774497 0.0628817314937 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.3799401198 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.5979740519 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 98.500998004 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.