Whether an argument convicing and valuable or not depends on practice in most ocassion while not the ability to persuade someone who holds opposite opinion. Once upon a time, the geocentrism was the dominating theory in astronomy area, it was also convincing and the people who spupported this viewpoint set Copernicus who asserted heliocentrism to death. It seemed the theory by majority was right while after hundreds of years, the truth was known by all of us. Indeed the pope and his people denfened the viewpoint successfully which did not win the debate in front of the time.So to me, the best way to test an argument is practice. As there is an old saying that practice is the only criterion to test the truth. Likewise, I will address my viewpoint as below.
To begin with, when we discuss this essay concerning supports and opposings, I belive it is a good process of improving the argument. Surely like the debate of the center of our Solar System, which may be indicated as the Cosmos hundred years ago, our hero Copernicus' incidence shows up again. The majority with the geocentrism was challenged by Copernicus, while that was not the end, after his death, more and more scientist called the theory into question like Galileo. So it was an process which propeled the development of Astronomy, without the endeavor of Copernicus, we may not find the truth of the theoy. However, there is another theory that the cosmos is just a reflection of somewhere else, so at this time, you can sit back your seat and calm down, because the Phiscists nowadays began to question the world we are living in is just a video played by some mysterious force called mutil-dimension space,which is much more complicated and more important, the theory including heliocentrism is wrong in this place. So back to the reality which has passed seconds after your calming down, the argument itself may be evolving sometimes especially in scientific area, because the deeper we discovered the outside word, the more we feel complicated.
In addition, when I first time knew that the sum of all natural integers is -1/12, a negative number, I was worried instead of shocking. Given that this result just made my reconception upside down. While it is true because the result had been proven by four mathametist in different ways. So I belive there is no sound which oppose this viewpoint because the people who can propse the objection haven't emerged yet.
Finally, the world we are living in, is not coposed merely by right or wrong. For example, I do not think the paint by Picasso are valuable because it was so abstractive, while most people like them, so the essay should not be resived.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, likewise, may, second, so, while, for example, in addition, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83297180043 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65149934106 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522776572668 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.2345323146 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.777777778 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6111111111 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11883737793 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425021281185 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510857782836 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669702385422 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634884569453 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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