Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Major Cities represent the development index for a country. Major cities of most nations also preserve the culture that is inherited from generations. It is said that if we need to understand the country ethnicity we must live in the its capital city. I agree and support the claim made by the author that in order to maintain the capital cities, the necessary financial fund is needed from time to time.
One compelling reason for my belief is that major cities have different ethnicity receding in it. For instance, in New York, the people of more than 50 nationalities are living and working there. 30 percent of overall population accounts for immigrants in New York City. The pressure on subways system was inimical that Government has now allowed trains to run 24/7. Also with increase in subways timings, the cost needed to maintain it increases proportionally. the new staff is recruited and appointed on different stations and a new salary structure is made. According to Times now, the population is going to increase linearly in upcoming days and so as the need for electric power supplies in the housing facilities. Perhaps there is also an increase in home appliances like Air conditioning which is recommending for more uneven power supply. Therefore, in order to run a major city, the financial support from the government seems imperative.
Another reason for my view is, major cities comprises of major museums, public parks, fully furnished societies, maintained drainage system and a good transportation network. All their amenities cost hefty portion of the city annual budget. Also most industries have their offices situated in major cities. Parliaments and government offices also takes the space in capital cities. Any foreign minister usually visits the major cities while travelling. Therefore, financial budget is needed for maintenance to ensure that everything goes smooth and lucid.
However, some might argue that the preference of culture and its tradition is better seen in the cities nearby towns and villages, thereafter needed a good portion of investment from the annual budget but they are a smaller part of community that serves hand full of people , not the people from different nationalities. Also, with the absence of corporate office it seems difficult for government to put forth more fund then necessary.
In conclusion, it is clear that city act as a showcase for the culture and scientific development for any country therefore the good financial budget is needed in order to run and maintain it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...needed in order to run and maintain it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 414.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17874396135 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78495637314 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528985507246 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.4554264892 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4545454545 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.59090909091 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29152046617 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832034264636 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633341708922 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171882425638 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625336049859 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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