Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
It is expected from a government to financially support the major cities of the nation, in order to preserve and generate a country’s cultural tradition. I partially support the argument that the government should ensure that the major cities receive adequate financial benefit. Every country’s leaders are responsible to keep the cities infrastructure and build upon it to provide more tourism attractions as well as financial opportunities for the cities. The government is also responsible to maintain the historical monuments and also build more history. However, sometimes spending money on one particular city will distract the leaders from helping the minor cities with their financial struggles.
The major cities have lots of potentials for improvement and glory, because they normally have a higher population. However, cities they can’t thrive to keep up with the population’s expectation If the government doesn’t provide adequate financial resources. A city needs universities, banks, libraries, and other governmental related institutions to support the ongoing intellectual growth of the community which will help to preserve the tradition and generate new culture. That is why it’s essential to the government to provide the least minimum financial requirements for it major cities.
Additionally, the majority of the main cities of a nation have many historical and significant monuments that played important role on forming a particular culture. These buildings need ongoing maintenance and care which will be impossible to do without the government financial support. For example, all the museums in Athens are considered as historical monument that each depicts a significant event in the history of Greece and helps to keep their culture and tradition safe. The Greece government spends lots of money each year to ensure that these important historical monuments are preserved to introduce the Greek’s old culture and tradition to the rest of the world.
Here therefore, having said all the reasons why I agree with the government financial support to the major cities, there are some people that will detract my argument stating. They believe that government shouldn’t spend more money on preserving the culture of the major cities because there are other cities in a country that might require more attention and governmental support. Sometimes when the government is not financially strong, spending all the money on one city will result in lack of resources in the other areas of the country and prevents other cities from developing and improving. But, knowing that this argument is still valid, I believe that the government should dedicate some amount of financial support to preserve and keep the nation’s culture and tradition, especially in the cities that the country originated from in the past.
All the major cities have played important roles on making a nation unique to the rest of the world. All the governments should have a plan to ensure preservation of the cities culture and tradition. This will help the government to introduce their culture to the rest of the work as well providing opportunities for generating new cultures and traditions for the future generation.
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- Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.Write a response in which you discuss 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...s;s leaders are responsible to keep the cities infrastructure and build upon it to pro...
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Line 29, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...ve a plan to ensure preservation of the cities culture and tradition. This will help t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2800.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 503.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56660039761 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04744850026 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41351888668 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 864.9 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5745162621 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.15 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387725509816 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142122672513 0.0831039109588 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662862404281 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246090371183 0.150359130593 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045065309766 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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