Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Should governments put more emphasize in financing major cities rather than provincial areas? While it is right that major cities should receive superior financial support, it is rarely because cultural traditions are generated or preserved inside them. Quite the contrary, national cultural traditions are most often found in smaller cities and villages, many of them home to internationally recognized historical sites. In fact, one of the reasons some might argue that financial support should be directed towards smaller cities is preservance of such cultural heritage.
Major cities, like London are places where a considerable number of people are living. That being said, it is obvious that when population increases in an area, the need for infrastructure and public services rises. The cost of making an ungerground waste collection system, along with costs of providing healthcare for everyone in London, justifies a great deal of financial support from the government.
Aside from a great deal of population, major cities are almost always home to a nation's best universities. For example London has several well-known universities including the King's College. Funding a major city like London, means better ameneties for London universities which will ultimately result in scientific and technological advancements for a country.
Also, major cities shape the international fame of a country. When people are asked about United States, more often than not, they remember the skyscrapers of New York. Financing major cities in country helps those cities to modernize faster and present a better picture of the country to the world.
Ultimately, providing financial support for major cities is a great idea. Not because it helps preserving cultural signature of a country, but rather because it helps a nation to move forward.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
... major cities are almost always home to a nations best universities. For example London h...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'nations the best'.
Suggestion: nations the best
...ajor cities are almost always home to a nations best universities. For example London has se...
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Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to preserve' or 'preserve'.
Suggestion: to preserve; preserve
...s is a great idea. Not because it helps preserving cultural signature of a country, but ra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 283.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53003533569 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87587793123 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586572438163 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5929071324 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289570116145 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996354948326 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685258484255 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153834775365 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819346350005 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.