Culture and tradition reveal the decorum of the nation. Nation with rich cultural heritage is known all over the world. Cities are the hub for the nation's cultural traditions. But one cannot ignore the fact that rural areas are also important like major cities because these are the origin of the cultural traditions. Government must ensure that the places where national's culture traditions are preserved must get the necessary financial support irrespective of it being a major city or a small town.
Historical monuments are the quintessence of the historical culture and traditions of a country. They reveal all the information regarding the evolution of nation. It is common that today's national capitals are the places where the mighty kings had there capital. For example, Delhi the capital city of India was the capital of the Mughal empire which ruled major parts of India until 18th century. So, it it necessary for the government to maintain these historical monuments in the major cities. Moreover, these historical monuments can generate financial income for nation by attracting the foreign travelers. Taj Mahal, in the city of Agra, is one of the worlds seven wonders is the perfect example how people are attracted towards the historical monument. Government of India ensures that the monument is in perfect condition by providing time to time financial support.
Major cities are the educational hubs which provides good facilities than the rural areas. Students from all part of the country come to the big cities to complete there major education. So government must invest more money in providing the best educational facilities to these students. Government can provide scholarships for the brilliant student with weak financial backgrounds, encourage and fund extra curricular activities which will help the exchange culture and traditions between the students coming from different parts of the country. This will bolster the team spirit among the student and lead to ground inventions as well.
On the other side of this, major cities are vulnerable to corrupt activities. Corrupt people can utilize these funds by the government for there personal "greed''. We hear news of major scandals with are mostly from the major cities. But it is also true that rural places are the origin of these cultural tradition. These rural people migrate to the cities and thus we can see that the basic origin of the cultural and tradition are the rustic areas. Government cannot overlook them. For the overall development of the nation govenrment must provide financial support to both cities and rural areas equally.
Thus, if the government aims for the all round development of the nation is must provide financial aids to rural and major cities equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2360.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23281596452 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59772918364 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.4932671777 92% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2303277059 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7692307692 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3461538462 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.65384615385 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359724518216 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110958694819 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835389947895 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235906973976 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912050572915 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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