Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
The claim that government must ensure that their major cities receive financial support they need in order to thrive because nation’s cultural traditions are primarily preserved and generated in metropolises. However, the major share of preservation of culture and heritage is of villages and in some amount of cities too. There should be balance maintained for funding in cities and villages.
The major cities are more culturally diverse than any village as people from all over nation migrate to cities for various purposes. But being culturally diverse does not imply that culture is preserved. As cities are popular for being having modern life style, having good kinds of facilities (educational, healthcare etc) and these are main reasons people migrate to cities.
However, majority of people migrate from villages where the roots of culture are present. For example, in major cities the most popular festivals such as Diwali and Eid are celebrated but the festivals which are known to only particular group of community are celebrated in rural areas. And to preserve this government should focus more on rural areas for financial support rather than on cities who have other sources to preserve the culture such as cities can have financial support from the municipal corporations of that particular areas as taxes collected in cities are large sum of amount.
Additionally, the preservation of culturally significant sights will be more easy in rural areas as the rates related to properties and craftsman will be low contrary, it will be high in cities. The finance in the cities can be used for other development such as for hospitals , schools, colleges etc which is of more importance as majority people migrate to cities for these purposes as cities are more accessible and convenient than villages.
Concluding, as the culture has equal significance in cities and villages for this reason government should find balance for funding by keeping in mind all reasons addressed above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'balanced'?
Suggestion: balanced
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...he most popular festivals such as Diwali and Eid are celebrated but the festivals...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, as for, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2625 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72302300418 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484375 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4229287156 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406006475154 0.243740707755 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171524220139 0.0831039109588 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19704266777 0.0758088955206 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257769535824 0.150359130593 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.196061341261 0.0667264976115 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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