The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
A leader has to lead a team and to be a successful leader it is important to have the sense of cooperation and along with it variety of qualities such as persuasive talking, problem handling etc. Not having one quality is not going to help young people of the society to become a good leader in any field.
Having sense of cooperation is important but being encouraging, motivating and acting as responsible member for all the decisions and its results perhaps negative or positive. It is realy important for a good leader to take resposibility for the failure of its team because if any plan fails or does not performs as expected can be a big reason for the demotivation for the entire team. Example, when the launch of a satellite was scheduled by ISRO (a space research department of India) whose team was led by A.P.J Abdul Kalam a prominent scientist, it was failed in its first attempt and the resposibility of failure was taken by Abdul kalam this action kept the team motivated to work harder for the next attempt and the results were positive.
Additionally, when a team for instance a cricket team is taking part in the tournament they are eventually competing against the opposition team. In this scenario it is important for the captain to maintain the cooperation to keep the team intact and motivated and at the same captain should be aware about the importance of the competing and winning. Because competitive attitude not only helps to win but also to improve and recognize the areas which the team collectively will have to work to improve it.
Moreover, when the government leader is cosidered he/she is not responsible for just a group of people but for entire society of that particular nation. So, the qualities government should possess to be successful are much more different and complex. Politics is involved with capricious events one cannot tell what will happen when, therefore, a political leader should have all qualities mentioned above along with being wise and cunning as well. Political leaders who were not cooprative and only being imperious and such as Hitler, Stalin etc made a big negative impact on the whole humanity so it is important to be kind and harsh in a balanced manner to become a good leader.
Concluding, one cannot tell only a particular quality is critical to be a successful leader in any field. A good leader should have numerous qualities with being competitive and cooperative at the same time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85510688836 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76511903701 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467933491686 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6161713529 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0714285714 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14153887901 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602752003292 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641599512533 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07967317356 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451586972353 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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