Imagination is one of the significant features of human beings. While it it also important to know how to make full use of it. By this way ,the imagination could be a great help for us, or it is almost the same like dreams. Experince, on the other hand, is another treasure from our precedors in that we could make futher archievements based on these experince. Thus the experince and imagionation are both important for us and we could not ignore any of them. I will address my views as below.
To begin with, we need imagionation to guide us for the better future. After the observation of fire littering the bush or trees by the lightening, our ancestors found the meat of animals parched by fire was more dilicious. More important the lights of the fire made the cave they lived in bright and clear at night. At this point, we all should be thankful for the very first person who got to know the use of the fire instead of fearing the thunders and the lightening which could hurt him/her. The imagionation of this ancestor was a great step for the human-beings as we entered a new age which none of the other species on the Earth had ever evovled into. After that we imagine we could fly, we imagine we could talk with our friends thousands miles away simultaneously. Think about the invetions of of out imagination, yes, we can.
On the other hand, however, we need the experince to make our imagination come true. As the experince of human-beings are so precious that it records the human history of every field. Or in another word, it is the accumulation of human being's knowledge. Without the theories of Force by Newton, the scientists aftercoming could not make more theroems or discoveries of the Phisics. Even Einstein could not find the theory of relativity without the foundation that Newton established. Without experince, the imagination is merely a dream. Also, there are some people today who seem to sell their dreams which actually they do not. Elon Mask, the president of Tesla and Space X. Today he is famous by his plan of immigrating to the Mars which is impossible for now. While he did not deny the future. As his opinion, this plan which looks like a dream would come true by steps, of course, more important, by the experince of his and his groups. Now he had made a great archievement that the Space X made a big success of recycling the space rockets, in that this technology is significant for the immigration to Mars. So Elon Mask and his company continue to make the dream of human beings come true. We should admitt the Rome wasn't built in a day, this is another experince, too. So does the Elon Mask.
In all, I belive both the imagination and experince are all important for us. As the imagination would guide the human beings' future, the experince tells human beings how to make the future realized by the accumulation of the knowledge. Without the experince, the human beings could not dream a better fututre. Without imagionaion, our human beings would stop making developments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, look, so, thus, while, of course, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2492.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 535.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65794392523 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67767692371 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463551401869 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 785.7 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.38483146067 342% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1562855922 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.875 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.71875 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102127615703 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298305022801 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332345627571 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662404218971 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194148377422 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.