Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes .
Here, the claim posits that experience in any field is not a valuable asset than imagination , which according to me is based on faulty base. The reason suggets that people lacking in experience are always free to imagine without any constraints in that way .However, according to me an iamgination of a tyro in any field is always full of fantasy rather than actual implementation of that imagination in that field.
First of all, Imagination have to be proper defined before jumping to any of the conclusions regarding this claim. The results of the iamgination depends on the extent upto which an unexperienced person in any field has imagined. Imagination in any field has to be pragmatic in a way it can be implemented. Accordinly, Imagination of any field has to be related to its advancements and the way it can bring revolution in a particular field. Hence, the basic requirement for any imagination is that it has to be related to matter of the subject.
Secondly , people lacking experience in any field are just naive to the field and cannot just think or imagination about the field in the way it has to be imagined for better advancement in that field. For instance, a dilletante in a Internet of things based company can iamgine a outcome of a product which cannot be even possible with any kind of advancement in the field in near future. On the other hand, if the imagination is done by any experienced person in that field can result in a fruitful product of that imagination.
In past, it might be possible that someone lacking experience in any particular field has imagined something in that field and it might have helped to achieve a lot in that field. But this was the case where there was not much advancement in any field in the world. For instance, it might be possible that the discovery of the Revolving thing "A WHEEl" was iamgined by someone who didn't knew anything about the fundamentals of the wheels but , he just imagined about the comfort wheel can give to the world. This imagination of someone helped someone who knows the fundamental of such thing helped to dicover wheel and hence, it gave a better future.
Hence, by this way Imagination and Experience are both equal valuable traits in any field. Anyone lacking any one of the asset might get off track and it will not be fruitful for the person as well as the human mankind. In sum, I think Experience and Imagination are two facets of the same coin.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for instance, i think, kind of, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69837587007 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78311352068 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.399071925754 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5250962422 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.117647059 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3529411765 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224029791127 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926657614223 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675568514102 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159979991589 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079217598051 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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