Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
The Author of the issue claims that Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience. The writer further reasons that people who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes. In what follows, I will first discuss my response to the claim and then explain what I think of the reason on which the claim is based.
I fundamentally agree with the claim that imagination is a more precious asset than experience. Among countless reasons which can support my opinion, I will delve into the most conspicuous ones. First of all, one should take into account this significant fact that many of experiences have adverse consequences. In fact, a large number of experiences are accompanied by loss. In other words, when people want to experience something and do not imagine what may happen as a result of this experience, maybe encounter losing money, reputation, health and so forth. On the other hands, some of these losses are irreparable. Therefore, it is advisable that people first imagine what may happen and evaluate all unpredicted aspects and outcomes of that particular experience and if they find out that they will not face difficulties and loss, they can take action and experience.
Another equally notable point justifying my opinion is that lots of experiences have so many benefits. As a matter of fact, sometimes it is really valuable and advantageous for us to experience somethings, but at first we do not know what we can gain through that experience. Indeed, almost all people are trepid in relation to take risks and experience particular thing. Thus, this trepidation and fear will prevent them to do action. Consequently, they will not take advantage of the results of that experience, but if they utilize their imagination, they will accept to do action.
Nevertheless, as far as the reason is concerned, I do not agree with the author of the issue to some extent. That is, from my point of view, people should consider constraints of established habits and attitudes when they imagine to do something. According to the noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics released by recent research conducted in our country more than half of the people who use their imagination without considering constraints of established habits and attitudes when they imagine to do something will lose, so in this way their imagination will not be helpful and beneficial.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned arguments lead us to the conclusion that imagination is a more valuable asset than experience, but that was the story in a nutshell. Actually, there are some other reasons and examples challenging the claim which are not mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The Author of the issue claims that Imag...
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... reason on which the claim is based. I fundamentally agree with the claim tha...
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...ces have adverse consequences. In fact, a large number of experiences are accompanied by loss. In...
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...hey can take action and experience. Another equally notable point justifying...
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...tion, they will accept to do action. Nevertheless, as far as the reason is co...
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Suggestion: imagine doing
...ablished habits and attitudes when they imagine to do something. According to the noteworthy ...
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...imagine to do something will lose, so in this way their imagination will not be h...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'i think', 'in fact', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215447154472 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.160569105691 0.157235817809 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0670731707317 0.0880659088768 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0650406504065 0.0497285424764 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0589430894309 0.0444667217837 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.115853658537 0.12292977631 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0284552845528 0.0406280797675 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97614301668 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0264227642276 0.030933414821 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00406504065041 0.0016655270985 244% => OK
Determiners: 0.0894308943089 0.0997080785238 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.030487804878 0.0249443105267 122% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.030487804878 0.0148568991511 205% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2753.0 2732.02544248 101% => OK
No of words: 446.0 452.878318584 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17264573991 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35201793722 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266816143498 0.280924506359 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19730941704 0.200843997647 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.163677130045 0.132149295362 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97614301668 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 219.290929204 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466367713004 0.48968727796 95% => OK
Word variations: 51.7774115798 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.3 23.380412469 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.459404029 59.4972553346 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.65 141.124799967 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 23.380412469 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.95 0.674092028746 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 48.9816143498 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.26428571429 1.64882698954 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.543602293569 0.391690518653 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108228935119 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0784057234952 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.502144476727 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176462888719 0.149214159877 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198936673688 0.161403998019 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143321919878 0.0892212321368 161% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.392819116827 0.385218514788 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100837874738 0.0692045440612 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.379729912804 0.275328986314 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148133197119 0.0653680567796 227% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.