CLAIM: The importance of multidisciplinary education is overrated in todays times.
REASON: Education should be focused on preparation for a specific career path and thus students should be encouraged to only pursue a single area of study.
Education is important for everyone to become a successful leader in any field of discipline. Apart from being just educated, a focused
education in specific field of education is always beneficial. Choosing field of study at very early stage of career lets you become
virtuoso in that field. Whereas, multidisciplinary education doesn't prepare you for your propensity.
Students should be encouraged to choose their area of study and let them follow their dreams. Providing the option to choose area of
interest at very early stage of life lets students think about their personal interests and ways to develop those ideas. Elon Musk, a
revolutionist in space industry and autonomous cars, at very begining of his teenage, he bacame aware of what he wants to be and
started reading books about aerospace, rocket science. This dedication towards the field made him aware of almost any problem in
future. A focused education not only encourages students to select a particular field for study but, to develop those little ideas in their
mind in future.
Moreover, society has many advantages by letting their people to become experts in desired fields. In such a way, within few years
there will more number of people with expert minds and who also tend to develop things for the society. In graduate colleges, different
disciplines are available for students to choose and learn new things about that field. This allows students to develop their minds in
that field rather than those in which they are not interested. If the same kind of options are available from early schooling, students
would definitely become more innovative. Thus, society has its benefits in indirect way.
Additionally, it reduces chance of some students to fail in some subject of area where they are not interested and don't want to become
a scholar in that subject. If such things happens, it reduces the chances of higher grades and thus their confidence.
Multidisciplinary education not only lowers someones honours but also, it might lowers the confidence level. It also doesn't let
countries to creaste specialists in paricular field. Thus, choosing area of interest at very early stage is always recommended.
- All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems. 79
- CLAIM The importance of multidisciplinary education is overrated in todays times REASON Education should be focused on preparation for a specific career path and thus students should be encouraged to only pursue a single area of study 63
- Vandalism in Carlton County 50
- The well being of society is enhanced when many of its people questions Authority. 58
- Education 10
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Education
... from being just educated, a focused education in specific field of education is alway...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...ducation is always beneficial. Choosing field of study at very early stage of career ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Virtuoso
...arly stage of career lets you become virtuoso in that field. Whereas, multidisciplina...
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Suggestion: Interest
...oviding the option to choose area of interest at very early stage of life lets studen...
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Suggestion: Started
...ame aware of what he wants to be and started reading books about aerospace, rocket s...
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Suggestion: Future
...e him aware of almost any problem in future. A focused education not only encourage...
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Suggestion: Mind
... develop those little ideas in their mind in future. Moreover, society has man...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...lop those little ideas in their mind in future. Moreover, society has many advantag...
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Suggestion: There
...lds. In such a way, within few years there will more number of people with expert ...
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Suggestion: Disciplines
...ety. In graduate colleges, different disciplines are available for students to choose an...
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Suggestion: That
...s students to develop their minds in that field rather than those in which they a...
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Suggestion: Would
...lable from early schooling, students would definitely become more innovative. Thus...
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Suggestion: A
...rested and don apos;t want to become a scholar in that subject. If such things...
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Suggestion: Countries
...ence level. It also doesn apos;t let countries to creaste specialists in paricular fie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, apart from, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31388888889 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7025579447 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536111111111 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.237549586 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.65 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.97078651685 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221305320198 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690421878135 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690955061721 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719381969706 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633075049323 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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