Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Media used to very effective till a decade ago, before this widespread of internet. They used to take their job seriously providing crucial, informative news and making public aware without being biased. However media now has started working for clicks and views which will eventually maximize their revenue. They often are allured to post spicy, rumor and even false news without having to fact check. As a result, I partially agree it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as hero.
This haphazard distribution of news by media has led different genuine person suffering for the offence they have never committed. For instance, Johnny Depp faced media trial for several years only to be announced innocent later. As the matter went public, different medias started portraying him as convict and vilified him causing immeasurable loss to his image. His fans started to have mixed reaction towards him. Big corporations chose to stay away from him and different parties like Disney abandoned contracts with him resulting in monetarily loss of about $40 mil. Here the one who is guilty is media, based upon the rumor of the case they published news randomly only for the sake of receiving maximum interaction from the viewers.
It would be wrong to assume that this issue is confined to celebrities only rather different big personalities are also prone to it. For instance, Neil deGrasse Tyson, a very well known astrophysicist, used to tweet about the logical error of several fictional Hollywood movies. He used to point out mistakes and offers solution to it. It was quite informative to his audience who used to follow him and they often praised him for his knowledge about universe. Recently he was popular for trying to fix Batman’s Bat-signal which made Batman fans furious. Media hyped this issue supporting Batman fans and criticized Neil deGrasse which resulted more public attention and more criticism. Due to this and similar past incidents he expressed he doesn’t feel safe in internet and could stop giving his opinions completely.
However the image is not subject of scrutiny always. Some people can be above all medias. Some people have pretty firm image and influence that even media can’t cause any harm. For instance, Messi, popular footballer is often charged for tax fraud and cases are filed against him. But the case goes on and leaves him without a scratch on his reputation and his loyal fans are never bothered by it.
Media plays immense role in shaping public opinion. The repeatedly feeding of same fake news can make people starting to believe it as true. It is necessary to consider media as just a source and fact-checking everything before starting to blindly following it. Till then it is almost impossible that someone is only being praised by the media and to be considered hero by the society.
- TOEFL integrated writing Altruism
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- It was easier in past to find a job 73
- TOEFL Integrated Writing Task Directions In this section you will write a response to a question based on reading passage and a listening passage You have to consider the contents of both passages in order to write a good answer After reading and listenin 3
- Smart Cars 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are often
...eventually maximize their revenue. They often are allured to post spicy, rumor and even f...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'mil' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'mils'.
Suggestion: mils
...resulting in monetarily loss of about 0 mil. Here the one who is guilty is media, b...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...stop giving his opinions completely. However the image is not subject of scrutiny al...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...er the image is not subject of scrutiny always. Some people can be above all medias. S...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'trues'?
Suggestion: trues
...n make people starting to believe it as true. It is necessary to consider media as j...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2402.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 480.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00416666667 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54356486495 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 768.6 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1326469032 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.962962963 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.40740740741 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21522853327 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576872591072 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864120870603 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121688633146 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709072398087 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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