Claim: Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts.
Reason: Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus have better judgment and perspective than do members of the general public.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Throughout history any empire that has flourished has taken into account the voices of the masses. The prompt states that the major decisions should be left in the hands of the ruler as they are well informed about the situation and are in a better state to make fruitful decisions. I mostly disagree with the given claim for the below mentioned two reasons. However, I do concede that there are times when it is better that the decisions should be taken by the officials.
To begin with, the involvement of the public,as has been seen historically, makes the authorities more aware, accountable and have a view that aligns with the improvement of the condition of the public. For instance, recently the government of India, without discussing with the farmers passed a law which affected them in a negative way. There were mass protests for the same and the government had to eventually cancel this rule. Another example could be if in a college or university the head of the institute consults the other senior members as well as the students regarding who should be the college or university president. Also in case of selection of a sports team the captain ( the guy heading the team ) would be asked who should play in the team and he would most likely consult with all the players about the selection. It should be considered important that the ones in power consult the ones who will be affected by the decision as it will increase trust and lead to better decision making as well.
Furthermore, the ones in power would most likely not have information about the situations in great detail.For instance the government did not have much of an idea about the situation of prevalent anti-national sentiments developing in certain parts of Pakistan initially which is perhaps causing some issues in certain states of Pakistan .Another example could be if there are certain schools that do not have decent quality of teachers or certain hospitals that do not have decent infrastructure it is highly unlikely that the government will have information regarding this situation.Also on a few occasions the information about the defects in certain infrastructure that is developed by the government is provided by the people which if not done at right time could be fatal as well. So eventually the public does play an important role when it comes to letting the government know about certain situations that the government might not be aware of or might not pay attention to as much as the situation demands.
While it is important to involve the people getting affected in some or the other form in most of the decisions taken by the government, at times it becomes necessary that the government takes actions based on its judgment. For instance, in case of a war the government should take immediate actions in order to safeguard its people. Also when there is some medical emergency or natural calamity the public should not be consulted. In summary, the government can take decisions when it feels there is some urgency and if decisions are not taken quickly then there can be some harm.
In conclusion, it is evident that government should consult the masses whenever their involvement will be beneficial to them and during times of some emergency it should take matters in its own hands
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- Claim Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts Reason Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus have better judgment and perspective than do members of the general public Write a re 66
- Claim Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts Reason Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus have better judgment and perspective than do members of the general public Write a re 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in summary, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2742.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 560.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89642857143 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72347129935 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433928571429 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 865.8 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.732796664 60.3974514979 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.294117647 118.986275619 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9411764706 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 5.21951772744 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25237734751 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817889475747 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401614906044 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139928903907 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253387580505 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 14.1392134831 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.