Claim: Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
Reason: It is inappropriate — and, perhaps, even cruel — to use public resources to fund the arts when people's basic needs are not being met.
In my opinion,basic needs required to survive should be accessible to each and every citizen of a nation.There may be different reasons that sometimes some people are deprived of food,shelter and clothing.Govenment as a responsible institution elected by the people is responsible for welfare of the citizens.However,that doesn't mean in order to provide good facilities to people it should suspend funding for arts.The above statement states that government should stop providing funding for arts is based on the reason when people's basic needs are not met it is worng to use public resources for other purposes.However,I completely disagree with the claim and reason put forth by the author.
Firslty,a nation can be described as a complex society especially today as it encompasses numerous cultures,beliefs and lifestyles that coexist in a small place.In addition to that,economy of is another aspect which need to be guarded by the government.Therefore,there is lot of uncertainity on problems that could arise anytime.There are countless reasons a significant portion of citizens are inaccessible to basic needs such as natural calamity,economic depression,lack of skills,lack of infrastructure....etc.However,to look after the needs of the people,governement need to find the exact reason of the issue than taking action on other areas like arts.arts represents the unique culture of a country and also livelihood for portion of population.
Furthermore,government collect taxes from various sections of people who are citizens of the country.Therefore,no providing funds to arts is like targeting the wrong aspect as artists would be affected which in turn leads to same situation or further increases the unemployment.In fact,providing the resources for arts leads to promotion and attracts outside attention.For example,consider India as a country with lot of scope for arts.The government allocates significant portion of it's budget in promoting the traditional and cultural arts especially in remote areas where most of the tribes are situated.This provided a livelihood for the tribal groups and most of the remote locations became tourist places.
To conclude,funding of arts and upliftment of standards of living for people are mutually exclusive issues that need to be dealt with different approaches.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7225433526 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.12320692062 2.79657885939 147% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554913294798 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 86.0 23.0359550562 373% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 245.00956614 60.3974514979 406% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 495.0 118.986275619 416% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 86.5 23.4991977007 368% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.75 5.21951772744 551% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 7.80617977528 461% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288769955063 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175561960013 0.0831039109588 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846208669479 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175561960013 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846208669479 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.8 14.1392134831 345% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -32.73 48.8420337079 -67% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 7.92365168539 268% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.2 12.1743820225 322% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.08 12.1639044944 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.74 8.38706741573 152% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 11.8971910112 521% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.4 11.2143820225 325% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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