Claim: The surest indicator of a great nation must be the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Reason: Great achievements by a nation's rulers, artists, or scientists will ensure a good life for the majority of that nation's people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Nowadays, there is a controversial issue about what the surest indicator of a great nation should be.Some people may claim that the greatest nation lies heavily in its rules, artists, and scientists by virtue of their contribution to the country, which will ensure a good life for the majority of the nation's people. As far as I am concerned, while it may well to premise the statement at the first glance, I do not want to maintain that the great achievement by a nation's rulers, artists and scientists is the only indicator of a great nation.
In the first place, I have to admit that the great achievement and effectiveness of the nation's ruler definitely have a significant impact on the development of the nation. Leader's accomplishment can be examined by his citizens because they are always in accordance with each other. For example, after the economic crisis in America, it is president R that led his people towards rejuvenating the economic situation. The undeniable accomplishment, New Deal, has benefited numerous American people to help them get back confidence for life. Thus, we can proclaim that the rulers effectiveness can ensure the people's good life.
In addition, another compelling argument is that the contribution that artists and scientists strive for also comes up with an influential nation. That is to say, without the effort from artists and scientist, there is no possibility that the inner beauty of the country will be explored and the potentially multiple competence will be developed. For example, since the famous Chinese author Mo Yan’s has won the Nobel Prize, mountains of followers starts apprehending Chinese literature in a new way, which not only spreads the Chinese culture to the world, but also cultivate the reading habits. Such example can also be easily applied to the scientific field. Without any exaggeration, the advanced technology by scientists acclaims the competence of the nation in the global stage, such as highly developed military force and medical treatment. Thus, the artist and scientist's effort to the nation also should be given emphasis as indicator of a great nation.
However, by stating that the great nation can be ascribed to the profound contribution by rules, artists and scientists does not mean that the good life of people can be ensured only by their struggling. In other words, the claim that the surest indicator of a great nation must be the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists does not always hold true. From my point of view, we cannot ignore that the well-being of people is playing an increasingly indispensable role in measuring the greatness of the nation. According to what president Lincoln has said --- of the people, with the people, for the people, we can see that the well-being of citizen has become an indispensable and significant indicator of a great nation.
To sum up, given the reason above, we may safely draw a conclusion that the great achievement by a nation's rules , artists, and scientist will ensure a good life of people from both the economic competence and the cultural side. However, crucial though aforementioned factors are, we cannot ignore the increasingly important effect of the well-being of the people on the measurement of a great nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, in other words, to sum up, in the first place, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2755.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 539.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11131725417 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91795905621 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456400742115 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 848.7 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1824557312 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3684210526 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.511841743879 0.243740707755 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161306016265 0.0831039109588 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133080975694 0.0758088955206 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312704009389 0.150359130593 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132146290883 0.0667264976115 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.