Claim: Though often considered an objective pursuit, learning about the historical past requires creativity.
Reason: Because we can never know the past directly, we must reconstruct it by imaginatively interpreting historical accounts, documents, and artifacts.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which the claim is based.
Historic past refers to a long time ago i.e from the primordial times till the last decade. learning about it can be any kind of information like the things that happened at that time, things used or reasons behind why a thing happened. Though learning about past is considered an objective pursuit,it requires a little creativity.I agree to this statement.
if we had a considered an example of archeologists, if they find a fossil at a place they have to present it to the world why the particular fossil was found at that spot and what kind of fossil is it.To explicate this they require knowledge about what kind of livelihood was present there and adjunct to it they require a little creativity to conflate their knowledge and what ever they had found to present it in the form of a theory or a event.
there are many superstitious beliefs which come from the past and some still people follow it now a days.many people formulated why they followed a particular superstitious belief and had formulated many facts behind each one of them.One of the belief was to tie mango leaves to the doors during festivals this was done because the leaves released oxygen and it keeps the house fresh.To get to this point of formulating facts about past beliefs these people needed creativity and knowledge about the past, but majorly creativity was in need as they had to assume what was the problem behind each belief and why did they have to come up with that.
So learning about past does require creativity and it just cannot be credited as a objective pursue. it requires creativity to formulate theories about past because it has already happened and we cannot go forward with just the knowledge we have, little amount of creativity is needed to know why it could have happened that way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75399361022 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58909369848 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472843450479 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 23.0359550562 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.096578419 60.3974514979 326% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.571428571 118.986275619 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.7142857143 23.4991977007 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216167883313 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135274646545 0.0831039109588 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870582872573 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146197875664 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086508387842 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 14.1392134831 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 12.1743820225 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.2143820225 175% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.