The topic raises controversial issue of whether to claim that boredom should be a source of embarrassment or it arises from a lack of imagination and self motivation. Indisputably, boredom is expressed with a sense of self satisfaction. Nevertheless, people should be self satisfied only; when their efforts are paid off ;when they get approximate result of what expected. Thus, I genuinely disagree with the opinion that "boredom should be a sense of embarrassment" and I would agree that boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self motivation.
First of all, people get bored whenever they does and follow things that other people wanted to do or by getting controlled by other people. They doesn't know what to do and where to be creative. By doing same thing continuously they lack creative skills. I would like to point out that people should do things that they like so that they can creative ideas and their imagination levels will increase. To illustrate, let us look at the example of arts student. As we all know there are different types of arts like painting; drawing; origami etc., by doing these many new things they gain and knowledge and finds their work very interesting and can get motivation from their seniors. In this circumstances, obviously people won't get bored by doing things they like to do.
Furthermore, how can boredom be self satisfaction? people tend to get bored by lacking creative knowledge so boredom can't be of self satisfaction. In addition, boredom rather be a sense of embarrassment because people tend to get lazy so they lack in knowledge and losses themselves. Both common sense and personal experience have told us boredom causes due to lack of excitement in the things we do. Hence, all the evidence shows that boredom arises from lack of self motivation.
Admittedly, boredom might be a sense of self satisfaction but, only at certain cases like after completion of work our body tends to get rest then we can think as satisfaction. However, the above issue doesn't sufficient support to claim that boredom is a self satisfaction. Because, in most of the cases it arises from lack of imagination and self motivation.
In conclusion, as long as some measurements are taken or some areas are involved boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self motivation.
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- Claim While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self satisfaction it should really be a source of embarrassment Reason Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self motivation 50
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- Claim While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self satisfaction it should really be a source of embarrassment Reason Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self motivation 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, thus, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01285347044 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99546426348 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45501285347 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3264679032 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.45 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43372328829 0.243740707755 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17014528813 0.0831039109588 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140801968404 0.0758088955206 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302216019455 0.150359130593 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166445138308 0.0667264976115 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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