College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
College students, while faced with a plethora of options to choose for their careers, do need to consider the future job prospects in that field. Although this decision largely depends on a person's financial situation, it may seem more prudent to choose a field of study that offers a good amount of jobs.
Students from a middle class upbringing constitute a major section of the society. With limited funds to pay for college, it is a necessity for these students to secure a lucrative job to ensure a financially stable future. With reputed colleges demanding higher fees, these students often have to bear the burden of taking a loan for their college education. Having such a financial burden at a young age further narrows down their choices for the field of study. They ultimately choose a course which lands them a job, giving them their much longed financial independence.
With the growing age of computers and the booming software industry, the demand for software engineers has increased drastically in the past 10 years. While computers and electronic gadgets continue to dominate most of our tangible world, this demand is not likely to go down. To commensurate this rising need for software engineers, there is a tantamount increase in students pursuing computer related courses in college. With the promise of a high paying job, a lot of students tend to take up such courses even if their primary interest is outside of computers. In contrast, the proportion of successful versus unsuccessful people in fields like sports and alternate careers is so discouraging that students hesitate to pursue their passion even if they are good at it.
However, the fact that one would pursue a career in something they may not be particularly interested in may seem unfair, it depends on the individual to decide whether he is happy with the path he has chosen. Some long to pursue what they love as a career, while experience the greatest euphoria when they receive their paychecks.
The choice of career path depends on the person's financial situation. If one can afford to live without a job and take the risk to pursue what they really want, one should not think about job prospects. However, if they are tied down financially, it makes a lot of sense to opt for a career that guarantees a job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...though this decision largely depends on a persons financial situation, it may seem more p...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'while', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239436619718 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.154929577465 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0821596244131 0.0880659088768 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0422535211268 0.0497285424764 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.056338028169 0.0444667217837 127% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.140845070423 0.12292977631 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0352112676056 0.0406280797675 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67218383175 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0399061032864 0.030933414821 129% => OK
Particles: 0.00704225352113 0.0016655270985 423% => OK
Determiners: 0.110328638498 0.0997080785238 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140845070423 0.0249443105267 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0117370892019 0.0148568991511 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2312.0 2732.02544248 85% => OK
No of words: 392.0 452.878318584 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89795918367 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382653061224 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272959183673 0.280924506359 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186224489796 0.200843997647 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109693877551 0.132149295362 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67218383175 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.48968727796 113% => OK
Word variations: 62.7654105015 55.4138127331 113% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0588235294 23.380412469 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5176256259 59.4972553346 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 141.124799967 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 23.380412469 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.674092028746 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 50.3547418968 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.63888888889 1.64882698954 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447508321704 0.391690518653 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101311207603 0.123202303941 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0561585952134 0.077325440228 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.539623570263 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134775854824 0.149214159877 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171408248091 0.161403998019 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070797032739 0.0892212321368 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.316427678314 0.385218514788 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0312391549628 0.0692045440612 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279716083373 0.275328986314 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645883775637 0.0653680567796 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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