College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
College Education is of utmost importance in each and every person’s life. While it is true that the courses taken up during college play a vital role in finding jobs later on, the selection of courses should not be based on the probability of getting jobs in future. Thus, I completely agree with the author that a student should pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
As Albert Einstein correctly pointed out that everybody is a genius, but if you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will live its entire life thinking it is stupid. Every person has an interest of their own. In today’s world, data science is an exciting topic and any jobs related to data science have been entitled as the hottest job of twenty-first century. Thus, students taking up courses related to data science will be more likely to get better jobs in future. But to be a data scientist one need to excel in statistics, mathematics and coding. A person having a more creative mind may find interest in literature and arts and find statistics and mathematics boring. If such a person pursues data science as a career, he will be killing his creativity and also might end up being unsuccessful in the field. It is quite likely that he will perform poorly in his academics which leave him with no job. Even if he manages to get a job, he might not perform well there and get ridiculed by his colleagues each and every day. This kind of negative attitude will not only lower his self-esteem but also kill his passion for literature and arts. Thus, a person should always follow his passion no matter what and success will find its way. The eminent cricketer Sachin Tendulkar dropped out of school after eighth standard to focus on cricket. Just imagine Sachin Tendulkar leaving his passion cricket and continuing his studies as it would help him get better jobs in future! The world would have lost one of the best cricketers of all time. While it is absolutely important for a person to get a job after college, a good job should not come at the cost of a person’s dreams. A person should not hold on to a subject or career that does not bring them any self-satisfaction or happiness. However, if a person forcefully takes up a course that does not interest them; he might lose all his motivation to come to college and study, thereby increasing the likelihood of dropping out. Thus, motivating students to pursue subjects of interest is absolutely necessary to reduce the dropout rate from colleges. Moreover, new discoveries and inventions are made when people from various fields of interest come together. Hence, it is absolutely necessary to encourage each and every field of interest, not only the ones are more likely to lead to lucrative jobs, to make a the world a better place to live.
Parents from an early age should become aware of the likes and dislikes of their children and encourage them to follow their interest. If a student has immense interest in a subject, he can easily make a career out of it. One has to work hard to achieve success in life irrespective of his career choice. Thus if one is not satisfied with his career choice, all his hard work will go in vain. On the other hand, if a person is enthusiastic in his work, he will climb the success ladder and his hard work will pay off. Therefore, parents and teachers should motivate students to pursue subjects that interest them.
- Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in the city that a nation’s cultural traditions are preserved and generated. 66
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs. 54
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
...life irrespective of his career choice. Thus if one is not satisfied with his career...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, kind of, of course, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2865.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 615.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65853658537 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97987886753 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57419995086 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 915.3 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2282046596 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.321428571 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9642857143 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10714285714 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294316870248 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873431716554 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129291249941 0.0758088955206 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272021342855 0.150359130593 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14954774087 0.0667264976115 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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