College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
it is regarded as a one of the most difficult decision in entire lifetime that choosing one's future by deciding what to do for one's life. In this respect, a majority of college students have no idea about what they want to do in their future. thus, in some respects, it seems true that college students should be aligned to pursue subjects that seem to lead to jobs. From my perspective, however, they should be encouraged to pursue courses that interest them, not that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
The chief reason for my agreement for the recommendation is that most people have different ability to learn by realm of studies. actually, there is a interesting empirical proof that people can learn faster and efficiently by studying their field of study in which they have interest in. therefore, by encouraging students to pursue subjects that amuse them is the most efficient way to study such subject.
Admittedly, it is undeniable that there are many people around the world who regret themselves to pursue more on subjects that would give more job opportunities. We can find these people anywhere around the world, feeling rueful for their adolescent experiences. The common idea from those is that there should be anybody who lead them to more prospective way. By recommend the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs to college students, the ratio that the people who regret themselves in the future would certainly decrease.
Yet, this does not necessarily mean that college students should be encouraged to pursue subjects, because there are no one that can tell the subject of which can likely to lead to jobs. since the trend of international society have been changing rapidly, the essential skills needed are changing with respect to the trend. For example, coding skills related to artificial intelligence are highlighted nowadays more than that from several decades ago. many cannot predict this circumstances before, even Bill Gates, former CEO of the Microsoft Corporation, did not think as this way, since no computer in that time do not have any ability to run such heavy algorithms. thus, the term 'likely to lead to jobs' is meaningless, since nobody can tell the realm of study that likely to succeed. therefore, since the prediction cannot be done precisely, college students should not be encouraged to pursue the courses that 'seem' likely to lead jobs.
To sum up, it is actually a complex issue, and thus any easy answers are present. Despite encouraging college students to pursue subjects that seem likely to lead to jobs is somewhat advantageous in some respects, it is revealed that it is not in general. All in all, it can be concluded that college students should be encouraged to study subjects that interest them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in general, to sum up, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 28.0 11.3162921348 247% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2320.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 465.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98924731183 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63898220499 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440860215054 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.0 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5866153505 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.0 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.535161916489 0.243740707755 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17547636054 0.0831039109588 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177154428077 0.0758088955206 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316174906204 0.150359130593 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118501089627 0.0667264976115 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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