One must pursue their passion to lead a happy life. We are all aware of it but still thousands of employees are working just like robot with no interest and zeal .The problem is not that they are not following their passion but it could also be that they might not even be aware of their interests.
Many students right from the early stage in life knows their strengths and weakness and choose to follow their dreams and are leading a life full of contentment and satisfaction. Of course, it doesn't always be a piece of cake to choose what you dreamt of.Strong determination, support of family are two major factors that effects this decision.For example-The renowned cricketer Virat Kohli knew his passion for cricket and had family support and so needs no description of success in today's time.
However,there are students who are not aware of their strengths and so they follow other's footprints and end up having humdrum life .Those students need to be encouraged to follow their passion. In Ramayan, God Hanuman was also not aware of his power but it was Lord Ram who made him realize that he possess enormous power within him to even lift a mountain.
Getting a job after college is not the only aim ,student should have. One can not be happy if they work on something which doesn't excite or bring curiosity to them at workplace. And so one cannot face challenges enthusiastically and could be frustrated instead of taking it as an opportunity to learn something new.
Hence,it is indeed need of the hour that students must be encouraged to pursue their passion and teachers and family must support their decisions.
- As we acquire more knowledge things do not become more comprehensible but more complex and mysterious Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take I 33
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain y 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, thus, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 282.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79078014184 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61616824784 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7825837511 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.1 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142479692079 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621113930755 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372393841988 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804818465357 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030909010879 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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