Knowledge very powerful tool in life and one must know to use it efficasiously. The statement of author seems to be parochial to say acquiring more knowledge makes things complex.It clearly depends on the individual as what is the determining factor for acquiring the knowledge.If one is curious to know new things, acciduous then knowledge provides him with all the answers.But if someone is acquiring knowledge merely just for degree with no interest, it would definitely confound and appears to be daunting.
For instance, if the renowned cricketer Sachin Tendulkar was forced in childhood to gain more knowledge and become Engineer,he would find it complex because he has no interest in studies rather than in cricket.He finally listened to his heart and one needs no description of his success in Indian Cricket Team.
Hence, I disagree with the statement of author as
one cannot blame on the depth of knowledge if something appears to be complex,rather it is person's own will to be blamed for.If there is strong will power to learn more things, one can do it with facile otherwise it would appear to be impossible
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, so, then, as for, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 2235.4752809 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 442.535393258 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05347593583 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87894294931 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 215.323595506 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609625668449 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 704.065955056 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.534309109 60.3974514979 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.25 118.986275619 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.75 23.4991977007 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.21951772744 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19000586901 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104439216573 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565859433162 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117961564219 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307391458367 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 14.1392134831 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 48.8420337079 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.1743820225 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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