Competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at levels of education
The statement suggest that the quality of learning is hampered due to competition for higher grades.Which I found to be paradoxical as removing a healthy competition from the equation of learning would make the mindsets of our future generation to avoid doing arduous work whenever needed.My points of contention to explain the paradox are given below.
If we remove competition from the learning process we are rather refraining our next generation from seeing the reality.As there is a possibility that they would rather grow up taking education not seriously and would later found out that in a process to achieve something worthwhile in life hard work is inevitable.Which would make things even harder for them as they would have not faced this type of situation before.
Also competitions are a great way to cultivate a growing mind as it usually gets the best out of a person, makes them think in a more unique way to outshine others.It can also use to determine what skills do different person possesses , which can further be helpful in choosing what they want to persue in life.Competition can be a motivation for kids to learn and could bring the best out of them.
However competitions for higher grades means that children are required to perform to a specific standard from early stage of their life.It also lead to pressure from parents to do well which makes a child’s life more difficult. Also on failing in getting good grades would break their self confidence and would left them unmotivated,which you don’t want a child to face. Competition can also lead a student to take improper method like cramming up things instead of properly understanding it,which makes all the learning immaterialistic.
In sum,I find that removing competition for higher grades would be unjustifiable for their own future instead we should find a proper structure for the education so a child can learn his curriculum in a more pragmatic way.As it is more beneficial for them if we don’t hide them from competition and motivate them to face it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06725146199 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97995981137 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535087719298 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 23.0359550562 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.099991005 60.3974514979 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 247.571428571 118.986275619 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.8571428571 23.4991977007 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206472082225 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103965835583 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529810471544 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127673765674 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045596948806 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 14.1392134831 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 48.8420337079 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 12.1743820225 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.2143820225 189% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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