Creative artists are the pillars of society's culural and artistic exhibitions. They preserve the history of a culture in the form of paintings, music, literature, films etc. Without their contribution, a society is incomplete. For them to exhibit their talent, it is non negotiable that they must be given artistic freedom. History proves that when some artists are given freedom to express themselves, they create galvanizing artistic beauty which is praised for hundreds if not thousands of years. Such art also leads to flourishing of the country's artistic treasures. Therefore I agree with the fact that an artist should be given freedom to express their own ideas.
However, I disagree that they should "always" be given that freedom. It is plausible that their ideas may be revolutionary in art and culture but it disrupt the society's normal functioning and might create chaos if the idea is offending. For example, bollywood film director Mr. Sanjay Leela Bhansali got into trouble while releasing the film "Padmavat" ( on an Indian Rajput named Padmavati ) as it ( according to Rajput spokespersons' ) wrongly portrayed their society's culture. This created a huge chaos in the country leading to boycott of the film, intervention of the govt. as well as the Indian Film's board and also political leaders. On a similar note, I also disagree with the extent to which the issue is allowing freedom to these creative artists. A creative artist might create something which is magnificent when seen from his or her perspective but might be offensive to others. Also, for or after the creation of this art, they might hurt other people either physically or psychologically. Hence, creative artists must be given full right to express themselves but not at the cost of ethical and moral standards ( i.e. not in "whichever way they wish" )
A government, being the regulatory body of chosen spokesperson and leaders, has the responsibility of regulation of law, safety of its citizens as well as maintaining and growing the country as a whole ( in economic, financial, political as well as cultural aspects ). When a government makes a law or a restriction, it undergoes deep scrutinity and is only made for the benifit of the country. A government restriction or law, therefore, must be followed by each and every citizen of that country. Even though artists must be given freedom to express themselves, it does not mean that there should be no government restrictions on them. An artist is no different than a nonartist from a government's perspective and hence should follow the laws enforced by the government ( as they are for people's safty and betterment of the country itself ). We can also not ignore the idea of a creative artist being a criminal or a sociopath. Such artists if given freedom without any government restrictions might harm others. Keeping these facts in mind, I would suggest that having no government restrictions on an artist is a fallacious thought.
Thus, I believe that creative artists, when given freedom to express their thoughts, might create something magnificent but this freedom should exploit any ethical or moral standars and beliefs of the society. Freedom must not be given to such individuals at the cost of chaos or disruption in the community. Also, a government restriction on such individual is for the betterment of the person itself; as for a government, any individual ( artist or nonartist ) is the same. Hence, to sum up I would say that creative artists should be given freedom to express themselves in whichever artistic form they wish but they must also adhere to government regulations and must not do anything ethically or morally incorrect.
- Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option 58
- Company X has just switched to a 4 day workweek mandating that employees work 10 hours per day from Monday to Thursdaybinstead of 8 hours per day from Monday to Friday Although the policy is new Company X claims that the policy would help to increase p 68
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as for, for example, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3108.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 604.0 442.535393258 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14569536424 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95746018188 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03358861251 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44701986755 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 949.5 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.1057703843 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.111111111 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3703703704 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14814814815 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428719110663 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124438980905 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872138670658 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282151250325 0.150359130593 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184971583055 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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