Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is debatable whether keen judgment is of little value in every field if it is coming from a novice. Even though ideas of people with a lot of experience are highly valued, views of non-experts also has values that can have positive impacts.
To begin with, even neophytes often lack in deep knowledge and experience of a certain field, if they have solid points and insights, their judgments can have immense impacts. Fresh eyes and perspectives can oftentimes regarded more potent than ideas that are tried and trusted; it is more so in fields highly related with creativity. In fields that value novelty as one of the top qualities, views of tyros can be inspiring to many people. Take a super model Twiggy as an example. When she first had her debut, her style and presentation of herself was not conventional. She had a pixie-cut hair, skinny body, and wore slim clothes, all of which were against the mainstream. However, people loved her looks because of their originality, and Twiggy soon became one of the most influential models worldwide; she is still an insipiring figure to fashion people in this day and age. Had judgments of novices were considered to have little values, as the statement contends, Twiggy's unconventional idea would not have received so much fame. Since fashion field valued creativity a lot, her attempt could become successful.
Moreover, anybody's judgment has intrinsic values even when they are not experts because seasoned people are not aware of every detail and possibilites related to their fields. Keen judgments from other people can help in expansion of perspectives, thus facilitating expansion of a certain field. People with a lot of experiences are often so immersed in that field, and they are often too specific, which in turn, narrow-minded. Incorporation of ideas is healthy. In politics, government officers should investigate what ordinary people's judgments are because although ordinary people do not possess expertise in politics, opinions from them are coming from real life experience. Also, companies outght to care and research their customer's reviews; a myriad of customers do not have much knowledge of a certain product, but their ideas are valuable since they have insightful inputs that are critically related to increase of sales. Therefore, critical judgments coming from neophytes can be imperative because experts cannot know everything of their field.
Admittedly, ideas of people with a lot of knowledge can be more in depth owing to their accumulated knowledge. In fields like medicine and astronomy, accrued knowledge is very valuable, which many times overrides originality and ordinary reviews. However, overreliance on experts is not healthy. Even in those fields, people should be open minded of ideas coming from tyros since collaboration of experience and novelty can have synergic effect that outweighs the intrinsic value of expertise alone.
All in all, because of aforementioned reasons, the given statement is not valid. Taking either of the extreme sides can yield detriments. Mix and collaboration of ideas of experts and non-experts are ideal.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: However, people loved her looks because of their originality, and Twiggy soon became one of the most influential models worldwide; she is still an insipiring figure to fashion people in this day and age.
Error: insipiring Suggestion: inspiring
Sentence: Moreover, anybody's judgment has intrinsic values even when they are not experts because seasoned people are not aware of every detail and possibilites related to their fields.
Error: possibilites Suggestion: possibilities
Sentence: Also, companies outght to care and research their customer's reviews; a myriad of customers do not have much knowledge of a certain product, but their ideas are valuable since they have insightful inputs that are critically related to increase of sales.
Error: outght Suggestion: ought
Sentence: However, overreliance on experts is not healthy.
Error: overreliance Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Even in those fields, people should be open minded of ideas coming from tyros since collaboration of experience and novelty can have synergic effect that outweighs the intrinsic value of expertise alone.
Error: synergic Suggestion: No alternate word
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arguments: OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 501 350
No. of Characters: 2572 1500
No. of Different Words: 245 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.731 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.134 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.75 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 191 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 141 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 100 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 72 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.04 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.911 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.52 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.283 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.459 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1059, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cannot know everything of their field. Admittedly, ideas of people with a lot o...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256684491979 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.155080213904 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0944741532977 0.0880659088768 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0730837789661 0.0497285424764 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0392156862745 0.0444667217837 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133689839572 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0374331550802 0.0406280797675 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83909526267 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0142602495544 0.030933414821 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0516934046346 0.0997080785238 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0249554367201 0.0249443105267 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.017825311943 0.0148568991511 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3145.0 2732.02544248 115% => OK
No of words: 501.0 452.878318584 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.27744510978 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.399201596806 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293413173653 0.280924506359 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221556886228 0.200843997647 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155688622754 0.132149295362 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83909526267 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 219.290929204 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499001996008 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.6478178528 55.4138127331 106% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.04 23.380412469 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5923528403 59.4972553346 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.8 141.124799967 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.04 23.380412469 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.48 0.674092028746 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 49.3813173653 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.6 1.64882698954 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305491480705 0.391690518653 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0654342720392 0.123202303941 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.056152741373 0.077325440228 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.447723683842 0.547984918172 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142637898179 0.149214159877 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10841840132 0.161403998019 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582351559205 0.0892212321368 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.379085726408 0.385218514788 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0482069761231 0.0692045440612 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216374259516 0.275328986314 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249420841347 0.0653680567796 38% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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