Democracy is when the indigent, and not the men of property, are the rulers.
Democracy is a type of government where the people govern. America, for example, is a representative democracy meaning the people elect representatives to the government to carry out the wishes of the people. Throughout history, there have been many debates over who rules in a democracy. Some say that the rich and upper social class rule, while others say that the indigent rule. It is my belief that the indigent are the ultimate rulers in a democracy.
To begin, most of a nation's population is made up of the middle, working class when compared to the rich social class. If a democracy is to function properly, the nation needs to be represented fairly, and the indigent population make up the majority of a population. Therefore, I believe that if a democracy is to function the way it was invented to, the indigent need to be given more leadership positions in the government. Although some may say that the rich rule, since they are typically better educated, I believe that the indigent population rule and make better decisions due to the fact that they make up the majority of the population.
Moving on, I believe that the indigent are the rulers in the democracy because they experience first hand the problems and issues in everyday life. The rich, upper class may not realize these issues because they are fortunate enough to bypass the hardships because of their wealth. For example, it is common for wealthy people to send their children to private schools while the not as wealthy have to send their children to public, government run schools. The children who go to the private schools tend to receive a better education than the children attending the public schools. In the democratic government, if the wealthy ruled, they would not address the lack of certain educational funding to the public schools as much as if the middle class ruled. I believe that since the indigent rule, many common issues are able to be resolved.
Finally, if the rich ruled the democratic government, many of the lower social classes will develop a hatred towards the government and possibly rebel. Throughout history, we can see examples of this happening. The Revolutionary War resulted from the English colonies rebelling against the British government due to their mistreatment. Since England is a monarchy, the upper class ruled and did not listen to the colonies' complaints and issues. This ignoring of the colonies ended up causing a revolution. I believe that this is a reason that democracy is ruled by the indigent. America learned from being under the leadership of the British monarchy that the rich should not rule in a democracy. The founding fathers set up a democracy ruled by the indigent in order to create a successful society.
In conclusion, I believe that the indigent do indeed rule in a democracy because they better represent the entire population. Throughout history, it can be seen how the rich are not fit to rule because they fail to uphold the lower social classes' issues. Democracy is characterized by the common people ruling together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...in a democracy. To begin, most of a nations population is made up of the middle, wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2564.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95938104449 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7522988566 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41586073501 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 822.6 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9928013597 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6153846154 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8846153846 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.80769230769 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0785223191246 0.243740707755 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299981380364 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463552977871 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508651238945 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175975617143 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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