"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "
An organisation runs to earn profit and reach greater heights leaving behind its competitors.There is an implicit competition between corporations to earn the maximum profit .The issue in hand talks about the desire of corporations to maximise profit creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large.I agree with the given the statement and below are the points which substantiate my stand.
A corporations main objective is to increase its profit , even if it costs the welfare of the society as a whole.Corporations are known to be ruthless to achieve their targetsFor example,there are many cases reported in newspapers about how a factory deposited its waste product in the nearby river without even caring to treat it first.The river water is used by the population living nearby,causing diseases like cancer etc.This type of apathy towards nature especially humans reflect that the cooperations care only about there well being and not of the society as a whole.
Even smaller companies go to any extent to increase their profit margins creating a ruckus in the society .A very good example is given below.When the prices of pulses in India rose ,The government conducted raids in godowns of various suppliers ,only to find tonnes of pulses being hoarded to be sold in higher price increasing the inflation in the country .This clearly indicated that the companies where not interested to help the government to control inflation but where a factor increasing it .
Another example can be the numerous chit funds company running throughout the world.The corporations collect the money from the public with a promise of increasing the amount only to be later found out of them being fraud.Innocent people loose their life savings in this scams ,leading to anger among people.
All the organisations are not the same . Several other corporations which take into consideration nations welfare also.For example,Reliance telecom,corporation in India launched a cheap mobile data plan for a dream of Digital India.This plan will not only help them earn profit but also help in digitalising the country.Many organisations are also involved in philanthropy works.
So,it is correct to conclude that the primary objective of corporations is to maximise profit but amidst such corporations many organisations are thriving and earning profits but keeping in mind the welfare of the nation as a whole.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.288888888889 0.240241500013 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.187654320988 0.157235817809 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0740740740741 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0518518518519 0.0497285424764 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0320987654321 0.0444667217837 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128395061728 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0641975308642 0.0406280797675 158% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.12211861968 2.79330140395 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.041975308642 0.030933414821 136% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113580246914 0.0997080785238 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00493827160494 0.0249443105267 20% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0123456790123 0.0148568991511 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2419.0 2732.02544248 89% => OK
No of words: 387.0 452.878318584 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.25064599483 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390180878553 0.366273622748 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.297157622739 0.280924506359 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178294573643 0.200843997647 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131782945736 0.132149295362 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12211861968 2.79330140395 112% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 219.290929204 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571059431525 0.48968727796 117% => OK
Word variations: 66.3028514463 55.4138127331 120% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6194690265 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 55.2857142857 23.380412469 236% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 164.006470753 59.4972553346 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 345.571428571 141.124799967 245% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.2857142857 23.380412469 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.21349557522 614% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 85.0014765596 51.4728631049 165% => OK
Elegance: 1.77272727273 1.64882698954 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499485165484 0.391690518653 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.21839302788 0.123202303941 177% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0852114009576 0.077325440228 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.902145836668 0.547984918172 165% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.216417086667 0.149214159877 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.301047392755 0.161403998019 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118750060732 0.0892212321368 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343630419764 0.385218514788 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106732876268 0.0692045440612 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323650406397 0.275328986314 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10644134974 0.0653680567796 163% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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