the desire of the corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large.
What is the desire of a corporation when they inaugurate/ start their business and work? It is obviously the profit. But when the profit is taken unnecessarily by exploiting the people, it is the commoners who suffer. I agree with the statement that the desire of the corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large.
Most of the governments usually give permission to corporate giants to launch their companies. Those corporations have the money, Principal and wealth to invest and have a good hold with the government authorities. One good example is Reliance Industries in India. They have huge buildings and businesses and loot the people by extra charging. By "hook or crook" they will earn huge profits. As a result the general public suffers. It makes the rich richer and the poor poorer.
Mahatma Gandhi once said, "When you start a new project, think about the poorest person in the society and ask, how it will be beneficial for that person?" One needs to analyze and ponder upon the real intention of the multinational corporate when they start their business. To just cover their illegal incomes and to distract the general public, those corporate might help some common people and the general public is tempted to go to them again and they are hugely profited.
What is the general welfare of the nation at large? It is the development of all the people, not a selected few corporate millionaires. Billions in the world want their basic needs to be fulfilled in their lives and thus a holistic comprehensive development is the need of the hour. People needs the fundamental needs like proper medical care, food, water, education etc. Thus the desire of corporations to maximize profits is a matter to ponder.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rook' they will earn huge profits. As a result the general public suffers. It...
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...eir illegal incomes and to distract the general public, those corporate might help some common...
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...e might help some common people and the general public is tempted to go to them again and they...
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...ation at large? It is the development of all the people, not a selected few corpo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, thus, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02341137124 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78848347557 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548494983278 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.1219678446 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4444444444 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 5.21951772744 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353217986121 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117965802411 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187592699085 0.0758088955206 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22593063806 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185077357579 0.0667264976115 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.