The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large.
A corporation works for profits only. No person would work for a loss, so the desire of a corporation to maximize profits is genuine. A nation's welfare depends to some extend on the services provided by a corporation based in the country.
Corporations working on maximizing there profits would be seen as an asset for the welfare of nation. To earn profits country work on improving there products and technologies used which at the end contributes for welfare of the company.Here, the example of Reliance Jio can be considered. Jio was brought up to earn profits to the firm, but the services provided by Jio were of much better quality so as to prove a great competition to already established firms. Jio not only can up with their sim cards, but eventually kept on flourishing by launching various products like mobile phones,etc. These services and products were made available at low cost so as to target a large crowd leading to welfare of nation.
There might be situations where the profits made by company creates conflict with the welfare of nation. Maybe, there is a situation where a corporation uses some illegal ways so as to gain profits thus causing harm to the economy of a nation. It can happen that a corporation does not pay the taxes or give any inputs to nation, in this case nations welfare may be hampered.
So, by considering above statements the desire of corporations to maximize profits does not always be proved to creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 33.0505617978 15% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 261.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84674329502 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78137697858 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521072796935 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.97733733 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.416666667 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490611723081 0.243740707755 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195466061778 0.0831039109588 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161715667331 0.0758088955206 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.359559394341 0.150359130593 239% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176041925788 0.0667264976115 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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