Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs.
Different people have heterogenous opinion about certain beliefs. Some people always stick to what they have been thought right from their tender age and will hardly deviate from it. I agreed with the topic of discussion about people sticking to their beliefs, whoever tries to convince them on the flaws of that beliefs and why they need to change their mindset o it, they prefer to "turn a deaf ear" to that person.
For example, when we talk about religious, people prefer to die with the religious that they have been brought up with, most expecially if such people are extremist of the practice to the core. Trying to convince that kind of people will amount to wasting ones' precious time. For instance, Christains believe that Jesus died on the cross of calvary and arose the third day while Muslims disagreed with that. This has generated lot of controversies among practices of the two religious which they are reluctant to succumb to one another on it.
Scientist believe on the big bang theory that entails the formation of the universe why the two major religious followers believe that the universe came about as a result of words from God. Furthermore, in yoruba land, a tribe in Nigeria, there is this belief that the earth is formed as a result of the command given to Obatala, the son of Oduduwa. This and other accounts on the formation of the universe leads to controversies as people still hold on to their belief till this day.
In addition, there is this saying that, Education is key in ones life and is a path to greatness, success and wealth but som e people will dispute that there are those that do not go to school and are successful as well. They will go on to give numerous examples .
Though, sometimes, we disagree in order to agree and there are reasons we need to enlighten ourselves on certain matter and if proof can follow that enlightenment, those agaist that belief can succumb. For instance, in the ancient days, people believed that the earth is flat and not spherical but this turn out to be false by series of practical observation that went ahead to prove that the earth is actually spherical and not flat. This generated tremendous controversies among religious folllowers and till this day, some people still don't believe the view of the scientist while majority have succumbed.
In conclusion, discussing controversial topics with people that hold opposite belief to the topic in question is either way but mostly, people prefer to stick to their mindset and to what they have been brought up with even though few do succumb after the controversy.
- SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg the home of SuperCorp s original headquarters Moreover Middl 60
- Claim The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models Reason Heroes and role models reveal a society s highest ideals Write a response in whic 50
- The most effective strategy for a company to use to maintain and increase profits over the long term is to maintain high ethical standards Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above Support your views with reasons and 50
- The city of Winston has two large department stores Namen and Roscoe Namen is known for its high end designer fashions while Roscoe is known for more affordable fashion options Both Namen and Roscoe are each considering opening another store in the growin 68
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree wi 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...cumb to one another on it. Scientist believe on the big bang theory that entails the...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Scientist) must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...cumb to one another on it. Scientist believe on the big bang theory that entails the...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s this saying that, Education is key in ones life and is a path to greatness, succes...
^^^^
Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hey will go on to give numerous examples . Though, sometimes, we disagree in or...
^^
Line 9, column 540, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rs and till this day, some people still dont believe the view of the scientist while...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, so, still, third, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83518930958 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52996754969 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498886414254 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4113246491 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.6875 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0625 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.21951772744 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288068560684 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863345542772 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902494465533 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150470005058 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985466722831 0.0667264976115 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.