I completely agree with the statement that students not performing well in their fields must be abolished to continue further.Institution with this decisive quality will likely to excel at better rate and help students to nurture in the fields that best suits them.
To begin with,students who are performing reprehensibly in their respective fields are surely inviting big trouble in nearby future.It is utmost duty of institution to make sure students perform well so that they can have good future ahead.Institutions need to pay special attention to under performing students and find ways that can facilitate them to succeed.If still students are unlikely to be seen succeeding than institutions must take strict action and discard them for further pursuing education.
Moreover,one of the reasons why students don't succeed in their field of study is that of interest.Students must be obliged to find the path that interests them.This way they can be engaged in the subject enthusiastically,stay focused and can excel it the field with right amount of hard work.Not only that this way students can help their society by applying what they learn.If student is not interested in a subject than he won't be able to put right amount of hard work and work with enthusiasm.As a result consequences might be hard to endure.
Additionally,freedom to choose educational field of their choice is very crucial that determines how willing they are and eager they are to perform.If students are manipulated to opt other field than one that they are motivated about can result in devastating result which can lead student to depression.Many students commits suicide due to constant pressure,under performance and lack of interest in the subject.For example,Kota a city in India,recent data fetched from that city indicates many students commits suicide due to all of the reasons mentioned above.
In conclusion,Institution must take mandatory steps to prevail better future of students.If necessary institution should discard student from pursuing further education in that field of study.This may be a harsh step but it will help student to find a path that best suits him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33139534884 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3727745903 2.79657885939 121% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529069767442 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 23.0359550562 295% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.036358629 60.3974514979 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 366.8 118.986275619 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.8 23.4991977007 293% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.2 5.21951772744 387% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2018893073 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119785549754 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0190874862287 0.0758088955206 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119785549754 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190874862287 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.1 14.1392134831 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 48.8420337079 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 12.1743820225 245% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.82 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 11.2143820225 260% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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