Scandals is a very delicate issue,they tend to descry problems in aberrant ways than any speaker ever could.I completely adhere to this viewpoint.The reasons for my opinion on this issue are mistakes helps to build stronger system,loopholes in the systems comes in light and criminals are in public heed should be punished severely.The example that will be used to corroborate this opinion is Nirav Modi scandal of 1000 crores from PNB.
To begin with,Scandal when happens works like a catalyst,changes the scenario of the whole nation.Although,scandals are reprehensible and disastrous for our nation,descend wealth of nation indirectly affecting common people, they even work as a boon by escalating it into public.Once in public,government is pressurized to take certain necessary steps that even facilitates chances of finding loopholes in the system.For example, Nirav Modi, a billionaire who was able to rob 1000 crore rupees from a bank scandalized by help of inner workers of bank and few faulty paperwork. After scandal went public already he was gone,later govt. found problems such as human error and many loopholes with the system.
Moreover,Crime such as scandal occurs at a high magnitude involving many more people,searching a scandal deeply may definitely lead to people convoluted in it.These criminals must be punished severely,highest degree punishment should be given to them so that message is send in public and it does not happen again.For example, Nirav Modi scandal,digging deeply govt. found people associated with the crime.Not even his relatives but few of the bank employees were convoluted in it as well.
Additionally, a deed done is stronger than power of words,speaker or reformer can roar scandals in public.But scandal happens on a high magnitude which has much more impact than the sayings of a speaker.Scandals when happen tends to attract more number of people's attention.Thus resulting in nation wide massacre,not only impacting life of the criminal and all associated with him but as well the government running the nation.For example,assets of Nirav Modi has been held by the government,his account dissolved,his belongings government property now.He is a nation wide criminal not who has lost all his respect.
However,Scandals are reprehensible,escalating the nation backwards.They take away money of common people for their own greed.It affects not only the nation's growth but as well the pride of nation in front of the world.But through mistakes only problems of system comes in light and can be sorted making system impregnable.Thus nation can grow rapidly.
In conclusion,Scandals descries public attention in aberrant way than any speaker ever could because they bring loopholes of the system in public,criminals punished sends a strong message in public and through mistakes only system could be made stronger.The example cited earlier to bolster opinion is Nirav Modi scandal of 1000 crores from PNB.Hence,Scandal is boon,public working as catalyst,may help to solve problems discussed earlier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2598.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.539445629 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5687371713 2.79657885939 128% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543710021322 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 784.8 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 23.0359550562 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.798438372 60.3974514979 327% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.666666667 118.986275619 243% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.1111111111 23.4991977007 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 5.21951772744 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 52.0 7.80617977528 666% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141860593508 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633868630174 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394345875731 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801706716542 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382138581493 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 14.1392134831 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.24 48.8420337079 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 12.1743820225 204% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.74 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 11.2143820225 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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