“Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.”
Firstly educational institutions play a vital role in the students success. The success story of any student starts from the support of their family and next their educational institutions. A good rapport between the teachers and the students is must for any student's success story. Generally educational institutions have a responsibility to persuade students for pursuing different fields but dissuading students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed is also quiet important.
Let's consider the example of Sachin Tendulkar-'The God Of cricket', is one of those cricketers who gives the credit of his success to his sports teacher of his school who helped him in pursuing his career. it clearly shows that instead of dissuading in the earlier times , persuading him in his field made him successful. like this there are many other famous personalities who give credit of their success to their respective educational fields.
Even though there are many casing in supporting this claim, there are some cases where the students failed in their life as well because of their teachers support for the unlikely fields they pursued. instead of persuading in those cases teachers might have dissuaded the students for the better purpose.
considering there are different educational systems in the world, the western culture is where the students are free to pursue in whatever fields they want to and the teachers would support them in the process of achieving it whereas in some countries like India, the students cannot pursue the fields they like because the educational institutions will never persuade them in pursuing the fields which are unlikely to succeed, so this stops many students growth in different fields.
Thus till the time a student is not given an opportunity to explore their potentials they may never be able t achieve success and happiness.
Thus educational institutes should not dissuade a student from continuing in the field in which they are likely to not succeed but provide various opportunities and platform of growth so that they realize their potential themselves and learn to become better individuals and citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...l institutions play a vital role in the students success. The success story of any stude...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...achers and the students is must for any students success story. Generally educational in...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... to succeed is also quiet important. Lets consider the example of Sachin Tendulka...
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Suggestion: It
... who helped him in pursuing his career. it clearly shows that instead of dissuadin...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...stead of dissuading in the earlier times , persuading him in his field made him su...
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Suggestion: Like
...g him in his field made him successful. like this there are many other famous person...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to their respective educational fields. Even though there are many casing in sup...
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Suggestion: Instead
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Suggestion: Considering
... the students for the better purpose. considering there are different educational systems...
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Line 7, column 448, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...unlikely to succeed, so this stops many students growth in different fields. Thu...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...nts growth in different fields. Thus till the time a student is not given an...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e t achieve success and happiness. Thus educational institutes should not dissu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, thus, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29597701149 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77127584098 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474137931034 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.406225701 60.3974514979 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.583333333 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386058707279 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15653063409 0.0831039109588 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157632059314 0.0758088955206 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208207421202 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13810692939 0.0667264976115 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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