The effectiveness of a country’s leaders is best measured by examining the well being of that country’s citizen.
The effectiveness of a country’s leaders is best measured by examining the well being of that country’s citizen.
This statement is a very exaggerated statement compare to the leaders of the particular country .I believe that solely to blame or give credit to country’s leaders by examining the well being of that country’s citizens.So i disagree with the statement that the the effectiveness of a country’s leaders is best measured by examining the well being of that country’s citizen.Moreover i will providing two important reasons and a contrary which oppose and agree to the viewpoint of the issue.
On the first part ,I will give an example where the citizens were penury as compared to the government of the particular country.As such in 1990s when the nepal got freedom from the british empire , nepal had a good amount of wealth provided to the citizens of that country but they were not able to utilize that wealth on the educational background on compared to the other country south africa who were at the last stage of getting independence at the same time government provided equal amount of wealth to citizens compared to nepal and citizens were active enough to get that wealth accomated to their country .This example suggest that it depends on the citizens how they chose their leaders and then comes part of the leader who truly helps the citizens for their needs.So leaders should not solely examined for the well being of that country’s citizens.
On the second part I would like to give an example where the leaders are wanting to help the citizens for their needs but their are some non governmental agencies which only knows to fill their own pockets , so many of peers working under the governmental agencies can be corrupted or may be fraudulent. And we should also take care of the fact from cricket which says
a captain is as effective as is team.This fact can entrenched here a leader will only be more effective if he/she gets supports the citizens.The citizens should always respect their leaders as they were the people responsible for choosing them.
On the third part i would like the present a point that ,for example if a political leader’s starts campaign for helping the needs of people , but there were many number of people who starts opposing them so that the morale of the leader will instantly be down such that they will not be able as effective they can be.
On the contrary part ,to a extent effectiveness can be measured by leaders ,as such that how much development has taken place around a decade under that leader,economic growth and various factors for welfare of the people .Compare that leader with the previous leaders such that to calculate the development ratio and to calculate the proportionate growth of the country .
Concluding the issue i would like to suggest that there should be a number of factors which takes place along the well being of the citizen so not only the effectiveness of the leader should be measured by the well being of the country’s citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, third, well, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 28.0 11.3162921348 247% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2565.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 519.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94219653179 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87320636101 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.404624277457 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.9 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 23.0359550562 278% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 210.398431553 60.3974514979 348% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 320.625 118.986275619 269% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.875 23.4991977007 276% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.21951772744 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 43.0 7.80617977528 551% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.561042274784 0.243740707755 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.362010246675 0.0831039109588 436% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.301069384969 0.0758088955206 397% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.363993501553 0.150359130593 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.299734685859 0.0667264976115 449% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 14.1392134831 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.98 48.8420337079 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 12.1743820225 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.26 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 11.2143820225 246% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.