The emergence of the online “blogosphere” and social media has significantly weakened the quality of political discourse in the United States. Reason: When anyone can publish political opinions easily, standards for covering news and political topics will inevitably decline.
Write a response in which you examine your own position on the statement. Explore the extent to which you either agree or disagree with it, and support your reasoning with evidence and/or examples. Be sure to reflect on ways in which the statement might or might not be true, and how this informs your thinking on the subject.
As the de facto leader of the free world the political stance in the United states is always of keen interest to not only to the citizens of the country but also to the rest of the world. In the current age of internet communication many platforms like the "blogoshere" has emerged as the trend of news sharing and replacing the conventional medium of news media. The reason behind it might have arised from the distrust people has this days on the conventional news medias and their relentless spin-offs'. As a democratic country, the United States strongly believe in the freedom of speech. Although this right had influnced the check and balance with the government, its unregulated form has singnificant impact on the political issues. The conventional medias abide by a number of regulations which had been put their by keeping in mind the greater good of public. Now, one might argue that this blogosphere has somewhat removed the bias of the mass medias, but this personal political commentry hich doesnt need to adhere the regulations can bring more harm to the news it covers with personal prejudice.
If we focus on the presedential election of 2016, we can actually see the division in society about the political topics and news, who to believe, as the news were presented. different presedential candidate actually used the fear mongering technque to align more people to their agenda. Many political commentators expressed their opinion in favor of their favorable candidate and subjected other to calumny. Many false news was presented and could not be fact checked, which fomented so many controversy that it became a banal thing. although many conventional media tried to maintain their standard in this situation, still the distrust and favourable info to peoples assumption made them more align to what e can coin as "actual fake news". This created a big division in the daily american life.
not only in USA, but also in different asian countries where the socierty is dovoded by religious aspects, these personal opinions hen later might get turned into fake news resulted in many public unrest. Becasuse fact checking medium might not be availble to the common people. Thus it create more distrust then providng information.
However, one might argue that it is his or her right to express his or her opinion in what matter she choose. But without accountablity this might result in a chaos. With freedom comes responsibility. where the common mass medias are held accountable to every commentary they made, many personal opinion, which spread worldwide through the internet can not be brought to the same standard every time. Thus it may spread more false info & mass people who are unaware of this might caught between a dilemma who to trust.
From the discussion above it can be said that the current mode of communications has really made the flow of information and news more accessible and also made the conventional medias more accountable as how they tell describe the stories as there is always facts available. But the personal commentries which may be driven by personal agendas can actually harm and deteriorate the quality of the news and political issues they cover. Without proper regulation this might even result in further division in our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ave arised from the distrust people has this days on the conventional news medias an...
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Suggestion: doesn't
... this personal political commentry hich doesnt need to adhere the regulations can brin...
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Suggestion: Different
...to believe, as the news were presented. different presedential candidate actually used th...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much false news', 'a good deal of false news'.
Suggestion: Much false news; A good deal of false news
...ndidate and subjected other to calumny. Many false news was presented and could not be fact che...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun controversy seems to be countable; consider using: 'many controversies'.
Suggestion: many controversies
... not be fact checked, which fomented so many controversy that it became a banal thing. although ...
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Suggestion: Although
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'opinions'' or 'opinion's'?
Suggestion: opinions'; opinion's
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun unrest seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much public unrest', 'a good deal of public unrest'.
Suggestion: much public unrest; a good deal of public unrest
...t get turned into fake news resulted in many public unrest. Becasuse fact checking medium might no...
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
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Suggestion: Where
...aos. With freedom comes responsibility. where the common mass medias are held account...
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rought to the same standard every time. Thus it may spread more false info & mass pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, really, so, still, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2773.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 546.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07875457875 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79497955949 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505494505495 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 867.6 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4844425082 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.541666667 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212712127274 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530606193379 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551176378964 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11279152054 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699256724545 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.