Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Laws were made to establish order in society. Some of these laws are just, while others are not. I agree with the claim that every individual has a responsibility to obey just laws. However I disagree with the second half of the claim. Instead of disobeying and resisting unjust laws, one should actively partake in changing those laws.
Firstly, people in society have a responsibility to obey just laws because it helps maintain peace and prevent avoidable circumstances. For example, speed limits are enforced to ensure safety of the people. If someone were to speed, it could potentially result in an accident, harming society.
By resisting and disobeying unjust laws, it does not change the fact that the law is unjust. In other words, disobeying unjust laws does not make a statement about how unjust the law really is. causes disturbances to the equilibrium of society. Take for example Rosa Parks. During her time, there were laws made to marginalize African-Americans. Specially on the bus, they were to sit in the back to allow for the whites to sit in the front. Rosa Parks decided to resist that unjust law and sit in the front, which ultimately led to her arrest. While going against the grain, she was able to make a statement about how unjust the law was; nevertheless, it did not change the law.
Instead, individuals should work towards changing those unjust laws by speaking out about it. After Rosa Parks arrest, Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. was motivated by her motion of resistance and led a peaceful protest. It garnered attention from the central figures. After six days of protest, the Civil Rights Act was signed, granting African-Americans the freedom they justly deserved. The protest, inspired by someone who went against the law, brought about a permanent change resulting in a just law.
However, it is important to note what what is just and unjust is subjective. Therefore, it can create conflicts.
In summation, in society an individual has the responsibility to adhere to just laws and speak out against unjust laws, so that action can be taken to correct them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96327683616 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77596816155 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545197740113 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3490811376 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.2083333333 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.516675005789 0.243740707755 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126317709992 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11857821073 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241819224462 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966047970923 0.0667264976115 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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