Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
The speaker makes a claim that there are two kinds of laws: just and unjust law, and we should not obey laws, which do not base on justice. However, others believe that we should obey every law in all conditions. As far as I am concerned, I think that each side has its strengths and weakness. Before giving my opinion about this topic, I would like to discuss some of the reasons, which can confirm the matter, or some which can violate it.
To illustrate my position, let us to take a look why some people disagree with this idea that we must obey always laws. On the one hand, they think that unfair law has not been certain definition, and every one – according to his benefits— can have different idea about a same law. In this way, if we accept that people should disobey unjust law, anarchy will be prevalent throughout the society. On the other hand, a law surly has various aspects that one cannot think all of them. In this way, sometimes people think that a law is wrong currently, while the government legislate it because in the long time its advantage is more than now. I think that a small example can give some light to this topic. For a few decades in Singapore, the government has banned the consumption chewing gums. At the beginning, more people did not accept this idea, because they think that it violates their freedom; while in long time, people find that this rule improves their cities' environment.
Although, I admit that it is necessary to obey rules, I believe that sometimes disobey of unjust laws have more advantages. Human never can do ever things without any fault, or always take decisions correct. Therefore, it is entirely possible that people who have an obligation to impose law, do not consider all aspects of a matter and make mistakes. In addition, they can legislate laws regarding their benefits. So that, obeying these rules which do not base on justice, not only never can help having a strong government, but also promote Government Corruption.
All above evidence supports that abeyance of the laws in every condition is a complex matter, and requiring subjective judgments about diversity of factors, which are effective in this case. Thus, there are no easy or certain answers. Nevertheless, it is for this very reason, I agree that the laws do not come from God, and our protests can reform them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...out this topic, I would like to discuss some of the reasons, which can confirm the matter, ...
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Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'obey'.
Suggestion: always obey
...le disagree with this idea that we must obey always laws. On the one hand, they think that ...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to have' or 'have'.
Suggestion: to have; have
...ase on justice, not only never can help having a strong government, but also promote G...
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Line 4, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... God, and our protests can reform them.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'i think', 'in addition', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206382978723 0.240241500013 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.159574468085 0.157235817809 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0595744680851 0.0880659088768 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.063829787234 0.0497285424764 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.068085106383 0.0444667217837 153% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.123404255319 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0191489361702 0.0406280797675 47% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.46265424133 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0148936170213 0.030933414821 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102127659574 0.0997080785238 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.031914893617 0.0249443105267 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148936170213 0.0148568991511 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2364.0 2732.02544248 87% => OK
No of words: 413.0 452.878318584 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72397094431 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.297820823245 0.366273622748 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217917675545 0.280924506359 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152542372881 0.200843997647 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106537530266 0.132149295362 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46265424133 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 219.290929204 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537530266344 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 61.409116872 55.4138127331 111% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.65 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1348727303 59.4972553346 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 141.124799967 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.65 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.674092028746 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 42.4417675545 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.19708029197 1.64882698954 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24579552627 0.391690518653 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.055202670437 0.123202303941 45% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0527235865009 0.077325440228 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.449634645495 0.547984918172 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122145307474 0.149214159877 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884987149278 0.161403998019 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683139828897 0.0892212321368 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.300109371796 0.385218514788 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0537203263767 0.0692045440612 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180820698062 0.275328986314 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356946817116 0.0653680567796 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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