The fact that technology is outpacing the needs of those in cultures that can afford the technology
creates cultures of excess consumerism.
Technology is increasing at the present day by day and people are so attracted to it as if without technology they cannot do anything. By using technology people can know innovative ideas, places where, people, culture, taboo and the most important is can communicative with people so efficiently. It is obvious that technology is essential for our daily life but it also brings many harmful things.
When we were a child we used to had only one land phone or had a television for all house member. Now technology is so enormous that every member of the house not only has a phone but also has a smartphone. Moreover, it is so available
that a 10-year-old child has a smart phone with an internet connection. With a smartphone or using various apps now, people are buying equipment from Amazon, Flipkart, Daraz etc. Moreover, if people need to go a place just need to call rider apps or navigate a location and they will appear as soon as possible like Uber, patho etc.
Technology is making our life amenable but it has some critical disadvantage. People are getting more and more dependent on it and it also makes people indolent. For instances, in our country, the traffic problem is so high that people always try to avoid any journey even a short distance. If they need to go for shopping they use different online shopping site and order what they need even food.
Sometimes online sites are so deceptive that they misuse consumer trust and always try to attract with deceptive way. For example, if a new movie is out and becomes blockbuster the authority of the business try to imitate the popular actor or actress dress and give a name to attract the customer and promote so highly. As a result, some young kids attracted and demand to there family. But, the main thing is that sometimes the product cannot afford by the poor parents. Kids are so obsessed that some of them get to try to suicide or even try to murder parents. In our country Bangladesh, this kind of things happened. So, it is also a vulnerable circumstance for technology.
To conclude, technology is important for exchanging valuable information and using technology anyone makes life easier but, we always keep in mind that it can also be harmful for our future.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-09 | Seema Modak | 16 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'canned'.
Suggestion: canned
...ulture, taboo and the most important is can communicative with people so efficientl...
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Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ps now, people are buying equipment from Amazon, Flipkart, Daraz etc. Moreover, i...
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Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as possible 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...nd they will appear as soon as possible like Uber, patho etc. Technology is maki...
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Line 4, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s soon as possible like Uber, patho etc. Technology is making our life amenable b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73791348601 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64226055344 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519083969466 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4594412023 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.65 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871376069242 0.243740707755 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026750653412 0.0831039109588 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315568372747 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515309538886 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335167786539 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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