Focusing on positive aspects is better than emphasizing negative ones

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Focusing on positive aspects is better than emphasizing negative ones

The recommendation presents a statement that proves to be successful most of the times. However, I would not fully support it. Certainly, teachers aim to make students feel at ease and believe more in themselves while trying to make them more confident and more energetic. To do this, instructors often emphasize the positive action, while trying to turn a blind eye for the negative ones.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2644.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 538.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91449814126 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78210258661 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475836431227 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 828.9 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.10617977528 354% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.171601063 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.2 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200749769198 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620554612632 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605467293212 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110522421595 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352675844883 0.0667264976115 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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