Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Government role in uplifting the common man and diminishing common problems is immense. Government officials should serve every region under their authority unbiasedly without getting affected by the opinions of people.
People who live in a certain area or are affected by certain problems believes that government should solve thier problem. People do not know the magnitude of thier problems and nation's other problem. It is the job of the government officials to priortize the problems according to harm they can cause and treat them accordingly. For example, industrialists in an area wants cheaper sugarcane to increase their manufacturing process, but farmers wants sugarcane rates to increase so that they can meet expenses. In such cases government should make decisions unbiasedly that will benefit more people.
Moreover, People often gets greedy and begin to cheat. There are case when government started offering funds to families earning less than Rs.30000 in a particular due to demand of people. Starting by providing funds to 50 families the number rapidly increased to 400 families in 6 months. Many employed people left employement so that they can get access to free funds. Government should check if their actions are cuasing harm or good, it does not matter if they are in agreement or disagreement with general public.
Furthermore, People have different intellectual levels, and can be swayed by emotions,religious or cultural ethics. For example,some people in rural area believed that unfertile scared land in their area should not be used for any purpose as thet thought it was cursed and will do more harm than good. When government grant permission to a company and industry, a large number of people from surrounding villages petitioned against that decison. But now that company and industry has reduced the unemployement rate by 50 percent in that area.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 33
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 374, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...example, industrialists in an area wants cheaper sugarcane to increase their manu...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...y are in agreement or disagreement with general public. Furthermore, People have different in...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , religious
...al levels, and can be swayed by emotions,religious or cultural ethics. For example,some pe...
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Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...eligious or cultural ethics. For example,some people in rural area believed that unfe...
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Line 4, column 362, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...t permission to a company and industry, a large number of people from surrounding villages petiti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 300.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29666666667 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86707555223 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7377601425 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.3125 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153607818619 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499372895593 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328299185915 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940775308182 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102012745963 0.0667264976115 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.