The government should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford tye tution
The speaker states that government must provide free university education to a student who is admitted to a university but cannot afford the education.While government must definitely support student who cannot afford education,providing free university education is not the right solution to the problem.
A governments role is to support poor people by providing them with facilities and resources which they may not be able to afford because of their financial status.However when a student is provided with free university education there are high chances that such a scheme will put constrain on government spending on other public facilities.For example, if a government spends excessively on free university education by cutting spending on various sectors ranging from health and infrastructure then it will result in dissatisfaction amongst people. Such a decision will result in poor health care facilities and lesser job creation which will in turn result in dissatisfaction against the government.
Government should help poor students avail student loans easily and at less interest rate rather than providing them for free.Such a policy will make sure that the student will work hard diligently and does not get very complacent.Once the student gets a decent job he can definitely pay off the loans.Many people would argue that such a policy would create added pressure on a student.Agreed, it will create an added pressure but amidst all of this pressure he will work hard because he will have the thought of paying the student loans off at the back of his mind and thereby creating a decent lifestyle for himself and his family.
To sum up I would like to say that government should provide easy loans for students who cannot afford a university education rather than giving it for free.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 290.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23793103448 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08621460219 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 23.0359550562 252% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.269064333 60.3974514979 330% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 303.8 118.986275619 255% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.0 23.4991977007 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.4 5.21951772744 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332997934609 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22276106651 0.0831039109588 268% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181277558396 0.0758088955206 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268462905945 0.150359130593 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16640899684 0.0667264976115 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.3 14.1392134831 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 48.8420337079 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 12.1743820225 213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.8971910112 269% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 11.2143820225 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.7820224719 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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