“Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection of national
security.”
Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above. In developing and supporting your
position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true.
Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection of national security.I cannot agree more with the author on this.
Firstly, I believe that Governments are forced to circumvent or bend laws according to their own convenience only if there is no other option available ,under extreme situations.Their primary intention is to safeguard the lives of people and ensure national welfare so they are entitled to bend certain laws which they themselves created.As long as there is a valid justification for their actions, I believe they are justified in circumventing civil laws.
Secondly, let us take an example of how Government hospitals are run. The general protocol says that before any admission is made to the hospital or any procedure is performed on the patient,consent is required from a relative/guardian of the patient.But certain situations have demanded the authorities to act different as opposed to the protocol and treat the patients on an emergency basis without consent.Consider the 2008 Mumbai terror attacks.People were flooding into hospitals from various parts of the city, some sustaining bullet wounds, some suffering other forms of injuries.The Government thought this was an emergency and did away with the protocol on this occasion and only because of this, they managed to save hundreds of people. Had they followed protocol it would have been difficult to save so many people. But on that day it was all about the welfare of the people, trying to save as many people as possible.
Thirdly, let us take the example of the Pakistan Government. It is a country that has been a victim of many attacks and bombings over the past few years. And due to these activities,cricket came to a standstill in Pakistan and the team had to play their matches outside the country.But after many years, the situation improved and teams started visiting Pakistan again.But immense security was provided to both the national team and the visiting team. Presidential level Security was provided in order to neutralise any chances of an attack and keep the players safe.So the Government chose to break protocol and provide the players with this kind of security to keep them safe.
Lastly, I do believe that it is necessary to follow civil laws and of course they are designed keeping in mind every situation but some times the best option for the country is to bend certain rules in order to ensure national security.
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- Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection of national security Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above In developing and supporting your position you should consider ways in w 50
- Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection of national security Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above In developing and supporting your position you should consider ways in w 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07371007371 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9727719387 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523341523342 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 183.883362241 60.3974514979 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.727272727 118.986275619 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 23.4991977007 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 5.21951772744 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172722539474 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070992419675 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806957263929 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122621930106 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907866327181 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 14.1392134831 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.