This is vast issue which generally normal person facing everyday. I am partially disagree with given statement suggest that, government should focus on immediate problem of today rather than trying to solve anticipated problem of future. according to me, if the problem may occur in future number of time in future, then first and for most priority of government tend to word that issue.
Let us consider if there is large electricity plant project developed at out side of city.so that for building this plant daily 2 to 3 Hours of electricity cut off in city. Residential, industrialist argue for electricity cut off, instead they were well known that this plant after some time may useful for there own use. so that electricity shortage may not occur. Even though currently the people may face issue but after some this is beneficial point for all.
Secondly, consider for one year rainfall in all over state comparatively higher than previous one. all dams, river are of 100% full, still government not allowed to water supply daily, people blame on government that even though rainfall is enough still government not provide water supply daily as we face issue. Still there future conception which thing by government.
In another way, a statement may true. consider if road construction happen if government has sufficient man power, budget.Still take more time for just deciding whether cement or concrete road are good. taking decision and implement it in correct way may useful for public transport. It may also reduction in road accident.
Government mostly focus on solving immediate problem, immediate problem are different for different. so if government succeed in solving problem, they may have favoritism.
To sum with all this thing, Government take look at both side of view. whichever possible in which way look in that way. so that normal person have both assurance of government decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ue which generally normal person facing everyday. I am partially disagree with given sta...
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Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
... person facing everyday. I am partially disagree with given statement suggest that, gove...
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Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...to solve anticipated problem of future. according to me, if the problem may occur in futu...
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Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: in my opinion; I think
...to solve anticipated problem of future. according to me, if the problem may occur in future num...
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Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...blem may occur in future number of time in future, then first and for most priority of go...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
... electricity plant project developed at out side of city.so that for building this plant...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...is plant after some time may useful for there own use. so that electricity shortage may n...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...some time may useful for there own use. so that electricity shortage may not occur...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...some time may useful for there own use. so that electricity shortage may not occur. Eve...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...comparatively higher than previous one. all dams, river are of 100% full, still gov...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...de water supply daily as we face issue. Still there future conception which thing by ...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consider
... In another way, a statement may true. consider if road construction happen if governme...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Still
...rnment has sufficient man power, budget.Still take more time for just deciding wheth...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t has sufficient man power, budget.Still take more time for just deciding whether...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Taking
...ether cement or concrete road are good. taking decision and implement it in correct wa...
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Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...te problem are different for different. so if government succeed in solving proble...
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Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ving problem, they may have favoritism. To sum with all this thing, Government t...
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Line 11, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whichever
...ernment take look at both side of view. whichever possible in which way look in that way....
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Line 11, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “whichever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ernment take look at both side of view. whichever possible in which way look in that way....
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Line 11, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...possible in which way look in that way. so that normal person have both assurance ...
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Line 11, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...possible in which way look in that way. so that normal person have both assurance of go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16987179487 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65512905632 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4595609986 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8947368421 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285756175019 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895288420085 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166163656274 0.0758088955206 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178188718173 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205099876782 0.0667264976115 307% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.