Government is a body that governs the rules and regulations of a state in the interest of the people. It sets some targets for the common well being of all the citizens and tries to bring the less privileged at par with others. A government's main motive is to look after the needs of the people, best utilization of resources and implementation of ways for the development of the nation.
There are a few issues that every government has to deal with immediately, and some that need long term planning with foresight. It is therefore important for any government to segregate these issues to avoid chaos and to work efficiently.
If on one hand, the problem of unemployment needs immediate action, then on the other hand, the economic reforms should be made by anticipating the upcoming demands and problems. The government must try to foresee the future prospects of any project undertaken. It must be in a position to frame a tentative outline to meet the future demands, keeping in view the resources in hand. The borrowing or sharing of the latest technologies is done with an aim to have a smooth future. Since, enormous money is involved in adopting a technology and starting a project at the national level, like constructing a power plant, building a highway, importing or manufacturing aircrafts and ships, building a dam or railway line, the government cannot simply base them on the present demand and supply ratio. In fact, it should have a vision to see the future need and applications to avoid wastage of time and labor in the near future. Above all, it would be blocking the money too, if the plans and projects demand changes every now and then. For example, investing thoughtlessly in highways and good roads may need drastic changes owing to the increasing traffic. Thus, it would be wiser to anticipate the future of traffic on roads and accordingly invest in the different diversions on busy junctions, by-lanes and flyovers wherever necessary.
Challenges like illiteracy need to be taken care of immediately along with long term planning. If it is necessary to make the adults of today aware of the importance of education, then the government needs to anticipate the future and provide requisite facilities such that no one is disappointed by sending their children to educational institutions. Similarly, the law and order problems need to be tackled at times by an immediate amendment in the law. The provision of amendments in laws should be made with a futuristic approach such that the offshoots of similar situations may be handled as well.
The issues of poverty, natural calamities, terrorism, need immediate attention. If only plans for future are drafted to reduce poverty without taking care of immediate poor and malnourished, then the futuristic goals make no sense. In a similar fashion, if means are adopted to avert the situations of flood and famine without looking after the present victims of such natural disasters, then such a government is a disaster itself. The vice-versa being equally true, it is a sheer wastage of time, money and effort to wait for a disaster to occur, in order to provide relief to the victims. Thus, the government has a huge responsibility of focusing on both immediate problems of today and plan such that the anticipated problems of future are also efficiently dealt with.
- Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership. 50
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- Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated. 50
- Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently 34
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A government' or simply 'governments'?
Suggestion: A government; Governments
...the less privileged at par with others. A governments main motive is to look after the needs ...
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Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...is to look after the needs of the people, best utilization of resources and implementa...
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Line 7, column 1014, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...f the plans and projects demand changes every now and then. For example, investing thoughtlessly i...
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Line 13, column 233, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a similar fashion" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hen the futuristic goals make no sense. In a similar fashion, if means are adopted to avert the situ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'in fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256493506494 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.147727272727 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0827922077922 0.0880659088768 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405844155844 0.0497285424764 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0178571428571 0.0444667217837 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133116883117 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0470779220779 0.0406280797675 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89569522704 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0405844155844 0.030933414821 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.128246753247 0.0997080785238 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0162337662338 0.0249443105267 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00324675324675 0.0148568991511 22% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3363.0 2732.02544248 123% => OK
No of words: 562.0 452.878318584 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98398576512 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.58838876751 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350533807829 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284697508897 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20462633452 0.200843997647 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144128113879 0.132149295362 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89569522704 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 219.290929204 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498220640569 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 60.6493775811 55.4138127331 109% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.4347826087 23.380412469 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4238522898 59.4972553346 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.217391304 141.124799967 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4347826087 23.380412469 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.652173913043 0.674092028746 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 52.9045334984 51.4728631049 103% => OK
Elegance: 2.11811023622 1.64882698954 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.549937121659 0.391690518653 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0984285613086 0.123202303941 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0475642462065 0.077325440228 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.59295128971 0.547984918172 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115718510282 0.149214159877 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.248358086266 0.161403998019 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923340897697 0.0892212321368 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365242874959 0.385218514788 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.200863129914 0.0692045440612 290% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.377088632425 0.275328986314 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140600946604 0.0653680567796 215% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.30420353982 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 3.66592920354 300% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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