Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Governments should not offer college and university education free of charge to all students. Education is must for each and every person and for the development of country education should be promoted. To promote the higher education the fee structure of colleges and universities should be nominal.
Nominal fees should be taken from the students to provide them basic facilities. For the maintenance of the college building, to fulfill the basic needs of teaching, funds are required. So governments should make this universities as subsidies and a part of expenditure should be taken from students in terms of fees.
Some parents cannot afford the fees of higher education of their children, and because of their low financial position student won't able to take the higher education. So financial support should be provided to needy students in terms of reduction of their fees. Fees should be exempted to the students whose parents position are below the poverty level.
Fees structure of some private colleges and universities are too high and this financial expenditure is creating unnecessary burden on guardians. So Government should issue rules for proper fee structure of higher education and make it compulsory to be followed by all colleges and universities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...re required. So governments should make this universities as subsidies and a part of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 2235.4752809 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33663366337 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86016966845 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 215.323595506 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49504950495 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0692408769 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.181818181818 5.21951772744 3% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194991410166 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102585533783 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999275539164 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13910248032 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818210863622 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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